Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Undoubtedly, these days, the bad circumstances are happening extremely. It is often argued that either people have to accept the bad situations or must try to change these conditions. I fully agree with
this
fact that
although
accepting bad situations is pragmatic in most positions, it is better for people to try to improve their bad conditions. In turn,
this
essay will discuss the both views of
this
opinion. On the one hand, the more economic condition of a
country
become ruined, the more people have to accept to live in tough situations.
That is
to say that the vast majority of people are unable to alter their bad situations,
thus
the acceptance of
this
fact will make them feel more satisfied. When people are placed in
this
situation, they prefer not to deal with
this
position.
For instance
, the Democratic Republic of Congo is a great case of
this
fact.
This
country
was involved in several wars for many years and had a severe economic downturn. Recent research introduced
this
country
as the poorest
country
over the world. It is extremely unfair to suggest people, who live in
this
country
to improve their situations because none of the infrastructures in
this
country
are accessible for people to improve their circumstances. In my opinion, alteration of these situations is extremely tough but possible. To sum up, for the majority of people, who are placed in these situations, effort alone cannot alter
unfavorable
not encouraging or approving or pleasing
unfavourable
positions almost always, but endeavour must be considered as an inseparable part of human life.
On the other hand
, the more people try to better their lives, the sooner and
better
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best
results can happen. Some people declare that even in the most
unfavorable
not encouraging or approving or pleasing
unfavourable
situations, people can make their lives better via continued effort.
Hence
, instances of people, who worked hard and became successful abound in both developed and developing nations.
For example
, in 6 decades ago and after the
Second
World War, most countries involved in
this
devastating world war
such
as Germany, France, The United States of America and Russia had an economic bankrupt. Postwar situations
for
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in
of
these countries was extremely difficult, but
endeavour
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the endeavour
was the inseparable part of the humans' lives in these countries. After six decades of endless trying, the economic condition of these societies thrived as the United States of America and Germany these days have the best economic conditions over the world and Europe, respectively. I believe that endeavour is unimaginable able to defeat bad situations. To take something into consideration, the power of attempt has to be considered and not to be ignored. Some people are of the opinion that people have to accept their hard situations, while others are opposed to
this
view. I am sure that that humans have not to be defeated in hard situations.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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