In the modern society, many people find themselves being awkward in social situations like face-to-face gatherings. What are the possible causes of this situation and how can we deal with it?

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Over
recent decade
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recent decades
the recent decade
, with the technology revolution and rapidity of lifestyle, people going more and more to isolation, while the contact with
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any of various alternatives; some other
another
face
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to
face
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rarely
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rare
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an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
we will take a look
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for the possible causes for
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issue and
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how we deal with it. Overall,
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day the work is taking the most time of people, they spend long hours
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at
work or in education,
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,
womens
an adult female person (as opposed to a man)
women
are working beside
mens
the force of workers available
men
,
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lead to an
individual family
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individual, family
lifestyle,
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they don't find enough time to visit
neighbors
a person who lives (or is located) near another
neighbours
or other families and make social relation.
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, social media
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as
facebook
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Facebook
and messenger takes large space in our
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,
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spending lots time talking with
freind
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friends
friend
a friend
, but
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not enough to socialize with other peoples,
this
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leads to the confused feeling when we are
face
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to
face
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with people in
social situation
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social situations
a social situation
like wedding party and the out control of
interact
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interacting
interaction
interactions
withother
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with others
with other
.
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and foremost, the balance between social media and the real
life
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is very important,
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refers to the speaker or writer
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argue that
person
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a person
is a social
people
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person
and in need to contact with others to develop social skills and be an effective person. To sum up, With
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development
life
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is going to increase individual lifestyle, our duty is to balance our
life
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and keep interactions with others the important thing.

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