Advertising is all around us , it is an unavoidable part of everyone's life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is a negative one . Discuss both views and include your own opinion.

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It is a fact that advertising is everywhere and it is a mandatory thing of every person’s life. Several individuals believe that it is beneficial
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counterpart thinks that it has many limitations. Before giving my opinion, both views must be critiqued in the ensuing write ups Discussing the former view
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the foremost argument put forward by the supporters is, promotion of any product is useful. If a manufacturer makes any new product he has to publish that.
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, in my home country India, a brand which makes Ayurvedic things named by “Patanjali” which owned by one yoga expert Baba Ramdev. He started manufacturing of that items many years ago.
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he did not promote it
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five years. It is trending in our region because of its announcements on the television
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radio along with the newspapers.
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by the broadcasting customers get to know about the new outputs in the market as well as the benefits of it. Other than the marketing of products
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promotion is an important part in box office.
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publicity of a new shop or business is
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era, advertising became an obligatory thing in life. Focussing on the latter view
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the it states that there are several drawbacks of
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year a food packet of “Maggie” was banned because of the higher amount of lead found in it Still it was adverting as a lead free Maggie.
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it can cause a severe health problem.
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these displays can
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manipulate a child. Even some objects do not have an advantages which have shown by them while promoting it. Some creams
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with the advantages, there are certain limitations are
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there. To conclude and give my opinion, I truly believe that commercial is an inevitable part.
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it has a major role in today’s generation along with so many benefits. In a result
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it is a positive part of everyone’s life.

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