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Nowadays people in many countries follow the latest fashion, hairstyles, and so on . Is this a positive or negative development?

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It is undeniable that individuals have been fond of fashionable clothes and accessories over the
last
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 few years. While,
this
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 adoption of latest trends brings some adverse effects on society as well as for individuals, I
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 believe that it
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 helps people to keep abreast of the latest things. On the one hand, there are certain negative sides of
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 current trend.
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, it is a threat to our cultural identity.
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, people of any nation tend to get influenced by the mediated globalization and
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 are changing their dressing decisions by exploring fashion through magazines, television and cinemas and by doing
so they
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so, they
 are losing their own traditional recognition and in
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 way the cultural diversity is disappearing.
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, individuals are impelled to spend much of their budget to look attractive as the fashion
accessories price
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accessories, price
 is generally exorbitant and they usually borrow money from their friends and
some time
at some indefinite or unstated time
sometime
 from the banks which end up in heavy debts.
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, it is a normal trend that to change their personal appearance and looks people nowadays, go for a laser or plastic surgery.
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 kind of surgery may cause damage to their body parts if surgery is not done properly or may result in diseases in the long-term.
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, there are some positive effects that I need to consider.
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 and foremost
,
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 being fashionable do help in raising the standard of a person in society and help the individual to achieve uniqueness and confidence by virtue of which he/she can be able to present himself in front of the society.
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, it
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always proves
has always proven
 as a vital source to bring any change across the communities as whenever celebrities adopt any new thing, it soon becomes a popular trend.
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 but not least, fashion serves as a profession for
lot
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a lot
lots
 of people who depend upon
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 humongous industry for their daily needs and it is
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 considered as an art by which one can invent new styles, dressings and
jewelry
an adornment (as a bracelet or ring or necklace) made of precious metals and set with gems (or imitation gems)
jewellery
Jewelry
. In conclusion, I believe that latest
trends
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trend
 uplift the image of an individual,
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however
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However
, one cannot ignore the negative aspects of it completely.
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