The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. /Users/elifceylan/Desktop/task 1.jpg
The table illustrates
that
the green areas for 6 different places and those places are Africa, Asia, Correct word choice
apply
Europe
, North America
, Oceania , South
Correct word choice
and South
America
in years
1990, 2000 and 2005.
Interestingly, Correct article usage
the years
Europe
has largest
forested Correct article usage
the largest
land
and Ocenia
has the smallest Correct your spelling
Oceania
land
in 1990 , 2000 and 2005.At the
different Correct article usage
apply
point
,Fix the agreement mistake
points
Europe
has top
and bottom forested Add a missing verb
had top
area
Fix the agreement mistake
areas
among
the Change preposition
over
years
.
Africa , Oceania and South America
's green fields decrease while
it is increased in Europe
within represented years
.On the other side ,forested land
is 989 million hectares in 1990, however
forest area kept in 2000 and 2005 Add the comma(s)
,however
as
705 ha in North Change preposition
at
America
.Similarly
, Asia's forested land
neither increased nor decreased respectively in given years
.
Finally
, There is closest
difference between Africa and North Change the article
the closest
America
and both are roughly 700 millions
hectares.Change to singular
million
Likewise
, there is around 100 difference
between Fix the agreement mistake
differences
Europe
and South America
.In 2005,Smallest
number of green Add an article
the Smallest
land
is 197 ha and Greatest is 1001ha in Europe
and Ocenia
respectivelyCorrect your spelling
Oceania
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words europe, america, years, land with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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