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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. /Users/elifceylan/Desktop/jpg

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. /Users/elifceylan/Desktop/jpg
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The table illustrates
that
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the green areas for 6 different places and those places are Africa, Asia,
Europe
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 , North
America
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 , Oceania ,
South
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and South
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America
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 in
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years
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the years
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 1990, 2000 and 2005. Interestingly,
Europe
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 has
largest
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the largest
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 forested
land
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 and
Ocenia
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Oceania
 has the smallest
land
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 in 1990 , 2000 and 2005.At
the
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different
point
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points
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,
Europe
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 has
top
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had top
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 and bottom forested
area
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areas
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among
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over
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 the
years
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. Africa , Oceania and South
America
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 's green fields decrease
while
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 it is increased in
Europe
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 within represented
years
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.On the other side ,forested
land
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 is 989 million hectares in 1990,
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however
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 forest area kept in 2000 and 2005
as
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 705 ha in North
America
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.
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, Asia's forested
land
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 neither increased nor decreased respectively in given
years
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.
Finally
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, There is
closest
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the closest
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 difference between Africa and North
America
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 and both are roughly 700
millions
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million
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 hectares.
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 , there is around 100
difference
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differences
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 between
Europe
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 and South
America
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.In 2005,
Smallest
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the Smallest
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 number of green
land
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 is 197 ha and Greatest is 1001ha in
Europe
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 and
Ocenia
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Oceania
 respectively

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words europe, america, years, land with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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