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In order to be successful at a sport, some think you must be physically strong while others believe mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Everyone wants to be successful, in some particular area. It could be job, researches or sometimes, sport. For the
last
 one there are always debates what is more important for good athlete - a physical
strength
, or a mental health. I believe, that both of them are
important but
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important, but
 a physical
strength
 is the key one. Mental
strength
, of course, has a great influence on a life of every
sportsman
. The bad mental condition can affect on training schedule or
it’s
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 intensity. A person, who
can not
can not
cannot
 concentrate on his training, or lose his faith after
number
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a number
the number
 of fails,
cannot became
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cannot become
 a successful
sportsman
.
Moreover
, sometimes even the best athletes lose because weak mental health- they can’t
adopt
make fit for, or change to suit a new purpose
adapt
 to the high emotional pressure. At the same time, with a lack of
physically
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physical
physicality
strength
 it is quite hard to be a
sportsman
 at all. Despite there are exist a lot of Paralympic athletes, not all
kind
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kinds
 of sports can be handled by them. The weak health can close almost all paths to the professional sport. Olympic games,
for example
 help to show the best human kind’s possibilities, so there is no place for weak bodies. In conclusion, it should be said, that mental and physical health extremely important for any
sportsman
. Mental
strength
 helps handle with daily routine trainings and high-pressure tournament times,
physical
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physically
, at the same time, helps person achieve his professional goals.
In
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From
 my point of
view the
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view, the
 body conditions play the biggest role in a life of every athlete.

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