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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#country #language
Many people have
dream
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dreams
 of immigrating aboard for education or work. But primary
language
 of any nation
play
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plays
 a vital role in daily interaction and routine. I believe, communication is the most important factor and lack of same can create difficulties in aboard stay. Various problems can be faced by an
indiviual
a human being
individual
, without the ability
ti
in the direction of
to
 speak
foreign
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a foreign language
foreign languages
language
.
Language
 can become a barrier with the outer world,
therefore
 on
must
used to form the superlative
most
 capable to talk in
foreign
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a foreign language
language
, which will not only help him to work smoothly but
also
 avoid communication gaps.
For example
, students arriving for studies cannot gain knowledge if they are incapable of talking
,
Accept space
,
reading or writing in
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
 in a country were the
first
language
 is
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
.
However
,
praticality
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practically
practicality
 it can be more worse,
were
In or at or to what place
where
 you need to communicate when you lost your direction. It will be impossible to find any help, if you cannot convey what you want. Finding jobs
,
Accept space
,
buying tickets on counter etc.
are
Suggestion
Are
 few examples. There is not point where you can think of survival without communicating with others. In conclusion, to avoid certain issues in locating in other nation in terms of
comminication
the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information
communication
communications
, one should be able to speak the
first
language
os
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OS
os'
is
 that nation.
Otherwise
,
its
it is
it's
 hard to resolve day to day problems.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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