People nowadays are more interested in technology rather than their physical fitness .to what extent do you agree or disagree?

In

this

contemporary epoch, umpteen gadgets are available for the comfortability for homo-sapiens to make their life easy as compare to previous years.But it is reckoned by several masses that people are more interested to spend their

time

on surfing

internet

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the internet

rather than doing any type of physical activity.

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refers to the speaker or writer

I

am in consummate accord with the notion. To commence with

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,

in

this

competative

involving competition or competitiveness

competitive

world people

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world, people

try to earn enough money to

fulfill

put in effect

fulfil

their basic amenities so they often do online jobs through

internet

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the internet

.

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In addition

to

this

,

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mostly they use to spend

time

to complete their works some often do part-

time

jobs for their comfortability of life

some times

on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always

sometimes

it happens that folks are not having enough

time

to do physical exercise to keep

themself

reflexive form of "them"

themselves

fit and healthy.Apart from it, they have to sit for long hours to complete their work which results

to

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in

several diseases by sitting for

long

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a long time

time

.

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For

example some

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example, some

have to suffer from

obese

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obesity

,

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,

asthama

respiratory disorder characterized by wheezing; usually of allergic origin

asthma

,

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digestion problems and so on. Futhermore

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youngsters are more interested towards the

technology even

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technology, even

they every brand on electronic gadgets which are launching recently.As they are influenced by the celebrities to use the same applications which they are using and sharing with the public.

In addition

to

this

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even youth of

this

modern world is not worried about their studies as well as for their

physical fitness they

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physical fitness, they

spend

large amount

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a large amount

large amounts

of

time

on surfing the internet. To recapitulate, the notion is having ill -

effects but

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effects, but

it depends on an individual how to manage

time

for proper work

also

it can be tackled very easily if some pivotal measures should be taken by mortals.