Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter • suggest someone you think should receive the award • describe what the person does to help the community • suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person You should write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to the award you are offering to people who have helped in the
community
which I read about in the newspaper. I know a person whom I think deserves to win
this
. I am recommending
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Fatima Ababneh for
this
award. She is a famous GP in our
community
who is well-known for her voluntary activities throughout her life. I knew her since we studied at the same university and I remember she used to tell me about how happy she was to volunteer in various medical organizations and doing charity work. Before she opened her own clinic,
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Fatima treated everyone in need without requiring money in return. Even now that she is one of the best GPs in Amman, she still treats people who cannot afford to pay for free. I believe she is an outstanding person in our local
community
and everybody is grateful for her efforts and services. In my opinion, it would only be fair to recognize all her kindness and good deeds by
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her in a public ceremony so that she knows how valuable all her efforts have been. I suggest giving her a medal or a trophy to thank her for her services to our
community
. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Maryam Aljanabi
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