A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter • Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves • Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her • Explain how to apply for the job.

Dear Ann, I hope you are doing well. I have been busy with
a
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project work so couldn’t get in touch with you after completing my studies. I am writing in response to your letter,
finally
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I’ve found a
job
for you in the Tata Company, which is the best and most renowned company I could find for you.
First
and foremost, let me tell you your
job
description in short, all you have to make sure is customers are welcomed and attended as soon as they enter in a showroom.
Also
, check that all their queries are solved and they leave happy and satisfied. All other details will be given to you by the human resource department once you join them.
Secondly
,
personally
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I feel, it just suits your personality so well, remember in our school there was a project and you had to supervise a team to fulfil the
job
requirements and you won many hearts with your hard work.
This
role is similar, so you have successful experience
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with
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.
Finally
, you can apply online by simply completing their online form and by attaching your resume
then
human resources will get back to you to schedule an interview with you. I can’t wait to see you taking over
this
job
! All the best, Sam.
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