Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, many people hold the opinion that it is worth to share an
information
and data as much as possible in scientific experiments, business and academic researches, while others are cautioned to provide those resources free of cost. I strongly believe sharing information
allow people to develop society
by providing knowledge which can be very helpful for many student, young scientist
and even to a layman. However
, scientist
should categorize important data and make available those information
only after some consideration or restriction.
Sharing information
is actually an important issue in the scientific world these days, which I believe is an important factor for the development of society
. For example
, many students are taking advantage of free information
which is found as open source in the internet, which allow them to conduct their research, projects and experiments much easily from which they can develop new findings, techniques or methods. Consequently
, these activities have the positive impact on the society
, community
or the world at large. In addition
to this
many young scientist
worldwide would Suggestion
scientists
also
be able to take advantage from
freely available Suggestion
of
information
as they are into new innovations and finding. Moreover
, for a layman also
it would be very useful in many activities, for example
, they can solve their health problems themselves, they don't have to visit doctors for simple health issues. They can be aware of many important issues like various problems in society
which may be drug addiction, sexual harasshment
and environmental problems. a feeling of intense annoyance caused by being tormented
harassment
Therefore
, from these freely available information
people could benefit more and may help to build a better society
.
However
, some of the information
or findings may be much valuable which are found after arduous effort, if these data are provided easily and freely then
people may not value it. For instance
, in one of the researches done in a rural area of Nepal when the study material was provided free in one community
and sold in other
; results showed that the any of various alternatives; some other
another
community
who paid many
took care of those supplies that other Suggestion
much
community
.
Moreover
, sharing valuable information
may also
be precarious sometimes. For example
, sometime
it would be risky to government if secret on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
information
are shared
. So, Suggestion
is shared
scientist
should categorize the data to be shared or not.
To sum up, for spreading the positive impact in the community
which catalyses the development of society
, sharing of information
is of utmost priority.Submitted by shikshyagautam12 on
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