Some people think that the education system should only focus on preparing students for employment, while others believe it has other important functions. Discuss both sides and then give your own opinion.

There is no doubt that educational institutions play an important role in constructing their student’s career. While some believe that preparing their pupils should solely be

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the focus

of these institutions, I would argue that there are other ways universities can help students grow.

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, it is important for our educational curriculums

to have

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have

subjects that exclusively focus on practical skills that the current job market requires.

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is because most students hope that

after graduating they

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after graduating, they

will be able to find jobs in their respective field.

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, many companies require their newly hired graduates to have

basic understanding

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a basic understanding

of

practical aspects

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the practical aspects

of their work, which the universities can teach while their students are still enrolled with them.

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, some argue that preparing students for jobs should be the only goal of

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institutions.

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, I believe that there are other vital purposes that universities can provide

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as preparing students for volunteering.

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is because today there are many NGOs which always appreciate a bit of help with their magnanimous tasks in helping humanity around the world. These institutions cannot afford to pay high wages, so it is crucial that people choose to devote their time helping

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organizations. A

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purpose is raising good citizens. The reason for

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is that societies need active and vibrant

communities who

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communities, who

can participate in improving the world for their members and its future generations. Both of these purposes can be fulfilled by educating children while they are still at school so that by the time they reach adulthood, they will be better able to help their societies. In conclusion,

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it is important to teach practical

skills helping

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skills, helping

find jobs, I feel that educating students about volunteering and awareness if far more crucial to help communities grow.