Cashless transaction order of the day most of the time people prefer using plastic cash do you think this is trend will be useful for the society.

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There is no iota of doubt that
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most
individuals prefer using the cards rather than cash
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multifarious
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however, sometimes
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problems
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emerges
due to some reasons.
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The
following paragraph would shed light on both the pros and cons of the plastic cash
To begin
with the
first
notion that, electronic transactions are gradually replacing the traditional banking system. Electronic transactions and plastic card payments are more convenient
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Individual neither carry a huge amount of money nor cheque
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which
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most
people carry in previous time
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it is supporting the growth of e-commerce
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Online
payments amenities
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are provided
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an example of electricity bills it is quite easy to pay the bills I hate to standing in a long queue for
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hours, but
today just with the help of cards we can pay the bills from the home
additionally
it is time saving method
also
just few in hours we can pay any type of bills
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the flip side of the coin
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there are some nasty
consequences as well the
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consequences as well as the
major threat to using the cards is data hacking and cyber crime
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first
preceding all others in time or space or degree
First
and foremost card are not acceptable in small vendors because they don't have a knowledge about the
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the act of transacting within or between groups (as carrying on commercial activities)
transaction
machine
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secondly sometimes
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Secondly, sometimes
Secondly sometimes
the online payment mode rejected due to the technical issues
also
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
additional charges included in the online transaction
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Furthermore
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people don't have knowledge about the online transaction they mostly prefer cash system In
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conclusion, I
personally believe that merits are
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the demerits
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however, some
efforts like government should
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introduce
some rules against the hacking
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there are plethora of advantages but we have to be careful how to use the system

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