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As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people travelling there is an growing demand for more flights. what problems does this have on the environment? what measures could be taken to solve the problems?

#tourism #people #demand #flights #environment #measures
Dear Oanh, Thank you very much for your letter which arrived a few days ago. It was lovely to hear from you. I think the
restaurant
 which you told me in the letter is very interesting. I
also
 like to eat out and I usually go to a
restaurant
 for dinner with my family
tiwce
two times
twice
 a month. Our favourite
restaurant
 is a traditional
restaurant
in
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on
 Hang Bong street. It is not
big but
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big, but
 it is always busy. There are only
afew
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a few
 tables in the
restaurant
 and on each table is a vase with lovely flowers. There are plants in the room corners. I usually order the traditional dishes and eat them with rice.
For example
, fish cooked with sauce, spring roll,
…
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…
and vegetable and so on. The food is
deliciuous so
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delicious, so
delicious so
 we enjoy it very much. The service is
also
 quick and
frienfdly
characteristic of or befitting a friend
friendly
.
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.
 My family
always have
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always has
 pleasant evening at our favourite
restaurant
. Shall we go there when you come to visit my family
next
 time? See you
next
 time. Mai Exercise 3: Tell

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