As a result of tourism and the increasing number of people travelling there is an growing demand for more flights. what problems does this have on the environment? what measures could be taken to solve the problems?

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Dear Oanh, Thank you very much for your letter which arrived a few days ago. It was lovely to hear from you. I think the

restaurant

which you told me in the letter is very interesting. I

also

like to eat out and I usually go to a

restaurant

for dinner with my family

tiwce

two times

twice

a month. Our favourite

restaurant

is a traditional

restaurant

Suggestion

Hang Bong street. It is not

big but

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big, but

it is always busy. There are only

afew

Suggestion

a few

tables in the

restaurant

and on each table is a vase with lovely flowers. There are plants in the room corners. I usually order the traditional dishes and eat them with rice.

For example

, fish cooked with sauce, spring roll,

…

Accept space

…

and vegetable and so on. The food is

deliciuous so

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delicious, so

delicious so

we enjoy it very much. The service is

also

quick and

frienfdly

characteristic of or befitting a friend

friendly

Accept space

My family

always have

Suggestion

always has

pleasant evening at our favourite

restaurant

. Shall we go there when you come to visit my family

time? See you

time. Mai Exercise 3: Tell

Tue Feb 11 2020

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

174 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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Relevant & specific examples

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