Some people believe that men and women are equal and so women should be able to do any job they want. Others feel that men and women are not equal and therefore there are certain jobs which are not suitable for women.What is your opinion?

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Nowadays men and women are working side by side in each and every

field

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of life. Many thought that both men and are equal as they have equal rights and according to

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should do any kind of job of their own choice. While others believed that both are not

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women are limited to certain jobs and cannot

work

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everywhere. My opinion is that women should do all jobs

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there should be no restriction. Both opinions will be highlighted in the essay.

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, in the fast paced society women

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highly educated and seems to be working in every cutting edge

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. Despite from all problems faced by women, they have strength, ability to

work

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more deliberately

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their workplace

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men

excavation in the earth from which ores and minerals are extracted

mine

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doctors

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engineers, teachers, scientists, researchers

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chefs etc.

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women are now taking interest in the

field

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of atomic energy.Men and women can

work

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as a best team groups and gives

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better

best

results with mutual

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.Gone are the days, when women couldn’t proceed in getting

education

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an education

now with the passage of time, they have thrived and become

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pilots

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warriors, in naval

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, many

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say

that men and women are not equal to each other so there are particular jobs which

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does not

perfect for women. When women

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are getting

tertiary education and now there is a vast

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and professions which need to be worked by not only men but women

also

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. Like women are working as a hostess in not only

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but

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in buses in Pakistan and they are more hardworking. To conclude, if men and women are equal to each other

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then

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there should be no limitations

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selection of job and

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work place

a place where work is done

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.Women are able to

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in all

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or any became top educators in the world.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

299 words

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Some people think that the goverment should be responsible for crime prevention. Others believe that it is the responsibilty of the individual to protect themselves. Disucss both views and give their opinion.