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The Internet Has Replaced Traditional Books As Sources Of Information. do you agree? give reasons

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The
internet
 plays a vital role in storing and disseminating
information
. Some people assert that before long it will replace books. The positive and negative aspects of
this
 development will be discussed in
this
 essay. The
internet
 has made it easy to find
information
. Any
information
 that we need is now available at the click of a button. The
internet
 has
also
 made traditional sources of
information
such
 as books redundant. Nowadays people do not have to carry bulky paper books in their backpack.
Instead
, they can store ebooks on their laptop, Kindle or smartphone. There are obvious benefits to
this
. EBooks do not occupy space. They are much less expensive than printed books and can be shared with anyone within a fraction of seconds. On the flip side, if books get completely replaced by the
internet
 or EBooks, a few negative things may
also
 happen. To start with, reading an eBook for hours on end can strain the eyes. People who constantly stare at a screen may
also
 develop other health problems like neck pain and back pain. A paper book,
by contrast
, can be read for any length of time without experiencing any of these difficulties. Another drawback of
internet
 based sources of the
information
 is that they are not always available. We need an
internet
 connection and a supporting device to be able to access them. Because of
this
 reason, the
internet
 is not a good companion when we travel. Paper books,
on the other hand
, make excellent travel buddies. Another downside of the
internet
 is that the
information
 available on it is not always reliable. To conclude, the
internet
 has certainly replaced paper books and the sale of eBooks is soaring;
however
, I do not believe that books will be completely out of fashion because of their inherent advantages that eBooks lack.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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