Nowadays many young people are going to other countries for their future. What are the reasons for it? How it will be in 30 years?

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Currently a majority of young population
are moving
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is moving
to other countries for their
future
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life. In my opinion, having bad living conditions and lack of reasonable education or political system can be mentioned as the main reasons that induce the young to emigrate to other countries. Over the following 30 years, it will be reduced in some countries whilst others will be continuing to endure from those problems. Given some reasons I will clarify my points of view below.
To begin
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with, the younger habitants of the countries having poor economical position are nowadays
moe
used to form the comparative of some adjectives and adverbs
more
me
men
willing to escape their
countries
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country
. Because a
week
wanting in physical strength
weak
economy leads, in turn, into
a
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an
unbearable
healthcare
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health care
and nutrition situations, and
also
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into strict unemployment issues, especially the young leave their country with the hope of better
future
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life.
Moreover
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, the countries ruling by fore or
tyrany
a form of government in which the ruler is an absolute dictator (not restricted by a constitution or laws or opposition etc.)
tyranny
or providing bad education are facing these problems.
For example
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, some African and Asian countries are
strugling
engaged in a struggle to overcome especially poverty or obscurity
struggling
against
consistent emigration
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the consistent emigration
of the young
arised
located or moved above the surround or above the normal position
raised
by
reasons
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the reasons
mentioned above. Moving into considering the close
future
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, it will be possible for some countries to get rid of the crowded movement to other countries in 30 years.
some
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Some
Asian countries,
for instance
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, are on the way to gain significant political and economical and
also
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educational
improvement
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improving
improved
. Measures taken seriously by those countries will allow the young population not to move
in
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into
to
other countries for
better
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a better future
future
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.
However
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,
on the other hand
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, 30 year time period will not be long enough to settle all of the problems for African countries which are far from a noticeable development, and there will be required much more time to be able to tackle those problems. To conclude,
economical
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economic
and political issues are now main forces that make the young go to other countries.
However
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, it will be possible for some countries to keep
youngers
used of the younger of two persons of the same name especially used to distinguish a son from his father
younger
there while for others having extremely bad conditions will be nonsense in 30 years.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • migration
  • educational facilities
  • employment prospects
  • quality of life
  • political climates
  • cultural exposure
  • global networking
  • professional development
  • standard of living
  • healthcare system
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