Nowadays many young people are going to other countries for their future. What are the reasons for it? How it will be in 30 years?
Currently a majority of young population
are moving
to other countries for their Suggestion
is moving
future
life. In my opinion, having bad living conditions and lack of reasonable education or political system can be mentioned as the main reasons that induce the young to emigrate to other countries. Over the following 30 years, it will be reduced in some countries whilst others will be continuing to endure from those problems. Given some reasons I will clarify my points of view below.
To begin
with, the younger habitants of the countries having poor economical position are nowadays moe
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more
me
men
countries
. Because a Suggestion
country
week
economy leads, in turn, into wanting in physical strength
weak
a
unbearable Suggestion
an
healthcare
and nutrition situations, and Suggestion
health care
also
into strict unemployment issues, especially the young leave their country with the hope of better future
life. Moreover
, the countries ruling by fore or tyrany
or providing bad education are facing these problems. a form of government in which the ruler is an absolute dictator (not restricted by a constitution or laws or opposition etc.)
tyranny
For example
, some African and Asian countries are strugling
against engaged in a struggle to overcome especially poverty or obscurity
struggling
consistent emigration
of the young Suggestion
the consistent emigration
arised
by located or moved above the surround or above the normal position
raised
reasons
mentioned above.
Moving into considering the close Suggestion
the reasons
future
, it will be possible for some countries to get rid of the crowded movement to other countries in 30 years. some
Asian countries, Suggestion
Some
for instance
, are on the way to gain significant political and economical and also
educational improvement
. Measures taken seriously by those countries will allow the young population not to move Suggestion
improving
improved
in
other countries for Suggestion
into
to
better
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a better future
future
. However
, on the other hand
, 30 year time period will not be long enough to settle all of the problems for African countries which are far from a noticeable development, and there will be required much more time to be able to tackle those problems.
To conclude, economical
and political issues are now main forces that make the young go to other countries. Suggestion
economic
However
, it will be possible for some countries to keep youngers
there while for others having extremely bad conditions will be nonsense in 30 years.used of the younger of two persons of the same name especially used to distinguish a son from his father
younger
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