It is better to children if the whole family including aunts, uncles and so on should be involved in a child’s upbringing, rather than just their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Raising a
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is an extremely difficult task and raising them to be a responsible
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would be every parents dream. Some believe that involving family members
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as aunts and uncles would have a positive impact when fostering a
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. I completely agree with
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argument, as I believe
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would not only bring a great learning experience to a
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, but
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aid the young one to be a good law abiding
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. Other members of the family may carry a plethora of knowledge and experience that your own parents never have.
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, members of the family,
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as parents or grandparent have lived their lives longer than a
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's parent,
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, are considered to have many life experiences and an ample of knowledge that can be shared with a
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.
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, my own father were not mechanically sound,
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whenever there was a fault on our car he did not have a clue to resolve.
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, an uncle of mine was a renowned race driver and having a close relationship with him during my younger days gave me enough experience to work on a combustion engine. Another point to consider is that, when an adolescent is exposed to a great amount of family members, the
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automatically learns to a have greater human to human interaction and a solid bond.
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can greatly affect the
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's behaviour and assist to become a responsible law abiding
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.
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, studies done by the State Penitentiary of California suggest that, the majority of the major crimes convicts either were raised by only one single parent or were raised in an orphanage throughout their lifetime. Meaning that they were fostered in isolation. In conclusion, I strongly believe that being exposed to the rest of the family members is critical and can greatly aid the
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to learn a great amount of skills and knowledge.
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, raising a
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in a non-isolated environment can make a
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a good
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