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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

#cars #fuels
There are drastic changes that have been noticed in the environment over the years and one of them is a continual diminishing of fossil fuels,
hence
, if we ban cars that burn non renewable energy,
then
 it would be a great step towards preserving the same. So, I completely in agreement with the idea that all
such
 cars should be replaced with electric cars as it would preserve fossil fuels and save our climate from hazardous gases. As we know that with time, we are running out of fossil fuels and it is very much possible that in the future we would not see it. Preserving fuels by adopting alternate methods like using electric cars would be a great help. It will put a brake on the continuous depletion of fuels. Dubai is one
such
 example, who has already adopted the concept of electric cars and effected a tremendous drop in the usage of fossil fuel for transportation. The use of electric cars over cars that uses fossil fuel, not only preserves fuel, but saves our environment from dangerous gases. As we know that with the multiplication of automobiles, the air quality index is
also
 diminishing at a similar rate and becoming poisonous day by day. The use of electric cars will be a commending step to control atmospheric pollution. In Delhi,
last
 year’s AQI observed to be very poor,
hence
 the Delhi government has introduced electric cars in the city to control the air pollution of the capital.
Although
, it is still in a very premature stage, but would be taking over completely in the
next
 five years. I would be concluding
this
 essay with
this
 statement that the use of electric cars is the need of the hour to preserve fossil fuels and save our environment from air pollution.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fossil fuels
  • emissions
  • air pollution
  • greenhouse gases
  • climate change
  • sustainable
  • renewable
  • electric vehicles
  • battery technology
  • charging infrastructure
  • range anxiety
  • government support
  • incentives
  • subsidies
  • renewable energy
  • environmental impact
  • energy efficiency
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