Your local council has decided to close the only park in your town and build a car park in its place. You believe this will have a bad effect on the people who live and work in the town. Write a letter to the mayor. In your letter introduce yourself explain why you think the decision is wrong say what you think the council should do instead

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Dear Sir, I am Surya, I am a current resident of Dollars Colony. I have been living here since my childhood with my family members. Recently, I have heard that the

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situated near to the lake is being replaced with a car

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, I think the idea of building a car

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is a terrible idea.

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the

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is being used for many recreational activities by the people of the town.

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, the

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currently hosts many outdoor activities like yoga, cricket and running. Many people will be impacted with their activities as it is the only place for playing and relaxing in the town. I would like to request

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to consider my advice for replacing the

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. I would suggest

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feedback from the people residing in the town and come up with a strategy for replacing the

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, as

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could help analyze the impact. Yours faithfully, Surya

SuryaTeja DuggiTue Feb 11 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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6 paragraphs

159 words

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