Your local council has decided to close the only park in your town and build a car park in its place. You believe this will have a bad effect on the people who live and work in the town. Write a letter to the mayor. In your letter introduce yourself explain why you think the decision is wrong say what you think the council should do instead

Dear Sir, I am Surya, I am a current resident of Dollars Colony. I have been living here since my childhood with my family members. Recently, I have heard that the

park

that is

situated near to the lake is being replaced with a car

park

.

Firstly

, I think the idea of building a car

park

is a terrible idea.

This

is because

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the

park

is being used for many recreational activities by the people of the town.

Moreover

, the

park

currently hosts many outdoor activities like yoga, cricket and running. Many people will be impacted with their activities as it is the only place for playing and relaxing in the town. I would like to request

council

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to consider my advice for replacing the

park

. I would suggest

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feedback from the people residing in the town and come up with a strategy for replacing the

park

, as

this

could help analyze the impact. Yours faithfully, Surya