Psychological illness may not be as obvious as physical illness or disabilities, nevertheless, they are just as disabling in their own way. Society, however, is more accepting of those with physical than psychological illness or disabilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that despite mental disorder being effective in
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
own way, is not open as bodily ailment, so, people take up more with, those physically disabled ones. And, I totally agree because there is
lack
Suggestion
a lack
of knowledge and undesirability.
Thus
,
this
essay will elaborate about it in detail.
Firstly
, it seems to me that, a wide range of persons
do not accept
Suggestion
does not accept
easily to cognitive sickness, because there is little understanding about
this
phenomenon among them. To illustrate, the reason behind
this
situation is that there is less awareness regarding
mindly
maladies, for the reason that, the society
have not progressed
Suggestion
has not progressed
for it at that level as it should be.
Therefore
, they are unaware about the fact how people should deal with it and
this
illness is subjected to be less acceptable.
Secondly
, another cause for the non-acceptance concerning psychological ailments is the own
reluctancy
(physics) opposition to magnetic flux (analogous to electric resistance)
reluctance
of individuals.
For instance
, folks do not want to share about their personal problems, there can be several causes for
this
circumstance.
However
, a recent study found that
most common reasons
Suggestion
the most common reasons
are shyness and dreadfulness.
That is
why, masses feel shy or uncomfortable and even afraid, they do not give a chance to people to understand or accept about non-physical disorders.
Finally
, in conclusion, though inner
diseases
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disease's
effect in their own way, but
still they are given
Suggestion
they are still given
less attention as compared to corporal maladies because of poor consciousness as well as hesitation between masses.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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