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We live in abworld of technology these days.While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information out weighs the advantages

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Thecnology
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
Technology
surronuds
extend on all sides of simultaneously; encircle
surrounds
 us in all over the world.It makes our life easy
,
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,
but management and safety of
information
is
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are
 the main issue.To a certain extent, I agree that secrecy is the key in
information
 sharing.
However
, I believe that it does not overshadow
benefits
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the benefits
 of technology. On the one hand, privacy of
information
 is necessary an main part of human rights.People might have many pictures, chats which cannot be shown.There
arr
a unit of surface area equal to 100 square meters
are
 many private documents
,
Accept space
,
datas
a collection of facts from which conclusions may be drawn
data
dates
,
Accept space
,
agreements
in
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with
 the government that revealing
them
people in general
they
 lead to end of the country.
For example
, sending
datas
a collection of facts from which conclusions may be drawn
data
details
 to to Russia by CIA agent Edward Snowden caused huge problems in USA government.Hacking bank accounts
is
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are
 one of the most dangerous threat to
security
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the security
 of
information
.
On the other hand
,
useg
put into service; make work or employ for a particular purpose or for its inherent or natural purpose
use
 of technology has enabled man to lead a comfortable and easy life.In the ancient time people spent
ar
expresses position, direction or location, or point in time
at
 least 2 or 3 months for travelling, now it only
requirs
require as useful, just, or proper
requires
 maximum 10 or 12 hours.
Internet
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The internet
 has
also
 simplified many activities in our life
,
Accept space
,
such
 as people can call their friend for help when they are in trouble, book tickets for movies or travelling, pay bills
of
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for
 electricity, photos by using internet.Technology has
also
 removed barrier among different countries.People can work together or make
different relationship
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a different relationship
 from
differen
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
 countries via
internet
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the internet
. In conclusion, I admit that
information
 secrecy is important, I do not believe that it reduces
advantages
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the advantages
 of technology.
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