The use of personal cars has increased more than ever before but this use of cars causes many problems. What are those problems? In order to reduce these problems, should we discourage people to use cars?

In the recent years, many people prefer to

use

personal

cars but

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cars, but

the usage of these cars

have caused

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has caused

problems.

This

essay will discuss about

these problems and about

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these problems, and about

reducing them. I think we should discourage people from using personal cars.

In addition

to

this

, the government can

also

encourage people to

use

public transportations.

Firstly

,

traffic

intensity is really a huge problem recently.

However

, people think using their personal cars is much more comfortable for them than using public

transportation

.

Therefore

, they prefer to

use

their personal cars and that causes

traffic

congestion especially during working hours.

For instance

,

last

week, I was going to Istanbul with my

car

and you could not imagine the

traffic

in there. I got stuck

in

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on

the Istanbul bridge for more than 3 hours because of the many personal cars. If I had taken the train, it would have been much

more easier

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easier

than

this

.

Secondly

, the increasing number of

cars causes

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cars, causes

traffic

accidents. Lately, I

have got

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have gotten

into

traffic accident

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a traffic accident

traffic accidents

like

for example

, I faced an accident

last

week. I was using my

car

in the

center

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

of the city and I stopped at the

traffic

lamps and someone hit me from the back side of the

car

. Thankfully, no one was

injured but

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injured, but

my

car

needed some

repairment

the act of returning money received previously

repayment

. Basically, personal cars crashing

onto

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into

each other is very common and many people have lost their lives, unfortunately. Because of that, using public

transportation

can reduce

number

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the number

of

car

crashes. In conclusion, people have to be aware of

this

kind of accidents and they should not prefer to

use

their own cars.

Also

, governments have to encourage people to

use

public

transportation

and they can

also

give discounts on train, bus and other tickets.

Hence

, people would like to

use

public

transportation

more.