The media is increasing interest in famous people who have ordinary backgrounds. Why do you think people are interested in the lives of famous people? Do you think this is a good thing?

Every popular person's life is now public with the advent of technology
such
as
internet
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the internet
and television, especially those who come from nowhere or of a poor
support
an active diversion requiring physical exertion and competition
sport
. Fantasy among
public
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the public
and
availaibility
the quality of being at hand when needed
availability
of sources
such
as free internet, television or a mobile phone are making it easy for them to know what is buzzing around the world. I personally feel that
this
isn't a good thing rather a disturbing habit.
To begin
with, each person
have
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has
their own interests
such
as following a famous personality or knowing about them and being
updating
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updated
on their current affairs.
This
trend is currently on the rise because of easy sources where access to the internet could
reveal possibly
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possibly reveal
all the personal details of a star. Media tends to concentrate on those who come from an ordinary support or alone because
this
emphasizes the curiosity among
public
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the public
and attracts them to watch or browse the particular content on how a slum became a millionaire or
a
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an
actor.
For example
, Wikipedia shows all explicit details about every star on the planet and research revealed that more than 30% of searches are with tag "how to become a famous figure in the society".
In addition
, when an individual tries to do the same as
some one
a human being
someone
who is well known for their skills they might probably end up in failure,
this
is because every mankind is unique and different and
this
trend to pretend as someone would always
leads
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lead
them to sorrow. It can
also
brag about personal status as one could feel bad themselves when they compare to a
multi millionaire
a rich person with assets of several million pounds or dollars (etc.)
multimillionaire
.
For instance
, a psychological study among
group
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a group
groups
of people revealed that they feel depressed when they see
a
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an
actor or famous personality, while they feel happy when they spend time with other of
same origin
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the same origin
or social situation. To reiterate,
although
television and media would telecast only short facts about fame of a star there is still much hidden facts that are not published or spoken anytime. Understanding and limiting
this
knowledge or considering it as an inspiration is valuable though. One can avoid the dangers of not getting sunken into the unknown's life by limiting the comparison.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • celebrity
  • ordinary backgrounds
  • interest
  • curiosity
  • fascination
  • escapism
  • entertainment
  • inspiration
  • motivation
  • identification
  • relatability
  • social comparison
  • envy
  • public interest
  • negative effects
  • excessive focus
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