Earlier, people wore clothes which were related to their culture. But now, people wear same type of clothes all over the world. Is this a positive development or negative development?

These days people dress up in attires representing different civilizations all over the world compared to a long time ago when they wore clothes in relation to their
culture
only. I believe
this
is a positive growth
world wide
involving the entire earth; not limited or provincial in scope
worldwide
because
firstly
its
the thing named or in question
it
unites different communities
also
it is a business platform which earns revenue for the government
thus
leading to
development
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the development
of the country.
Firstly
, dressing in clothes considered to be
for
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in
a particular
culture
brings different communities and countries together.
This
is because, if someone wears an attire for a different
culture it
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culture, it
shows support along with love to experience a different civilization
.
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For example
, African prints “
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Ankara
” are spreading tremendously all over the world
furthermore
various people outside Africa love dressing in them in order to represent Africa.
Also
in African countries nowadays, people are purchasing fashionable clothes produced by popular brands from
developed
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developing
countries
such
Gucci and Forever Trendy
.
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.
Because of
this
, people from various continents travel to Africa on
daily basis
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a daily basis
to experience African
culture
as well as Africans
adapting
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adapt
are adapting
to the ways of other countries. Business platforms for selling different clothing are coming up
everyday
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every day
.
Also
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Also, this
this
plays a big role in Government revenue, Given that the majority of people are purchasing these attires on day to day life worldwide through shipping or by Air.
For
instance in
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instance, in
Kenya, exportation of African print is high
therefore
these earns government income which is used for growth in public services
such
as hospitals, roads and social amenities. As a consequence selling different cultures
fabrics along
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fabrics, along
with clothing helps in country development as well as entrepreneurs. In conclusion, I believe that it is worthwhile for people to dress in
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from other cultures.
This
is because, it helps in bringing communities and countries together, showing support and love, exporting fabrics and clothes are beneficial for entrepreneurs and government.
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