Earlier, people wore clothes which were related to their culture. But now, people wear same type of clothes all over the world. Is this a positive development or negative development?
These days people dress up in attires representing different civilizations all over the world compared to a long time ago when they wore clothes in relation to their
culture
only. I believe this
is a positive growth world wide
because involving the entire earth; not limited or provincial in scope
worldwide
firstly
its
unites different communities the thing named or in question
it
also
it is a business platform which earns revenue for the government thus
leading to development
of the country.
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the development
Firstly
, dressing in clothes considered to be for
a particular Suggestion
in
culture
brings different communities and countries together. This
is because, if someone wears an attire for a different culture it
shows support along with love to experience a different civilizationAccept comma addition
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For example
, African prints “ankara
” are spreading tremendously all over the world the capital of Turkey; located in west-central Turkey; it was formerly known as Angora and is the home of Angora goats
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furthermore
various people outside Africa love dressing in them in order to represent Africa. Also
in African countries nowadays, people are purchasing fashionable clothes produced by popular brands from developed
countries Suggestion
developing
such
Gucci and Forever Trendy .
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this
, people from various continents travel to Africa on daily basis
to experience African Suggestion
a daily basis
culture
as well as Africans adapting
to the ways of other countries.
Business platforms for selling different clothing are coming up Suggestion
adapt
are adapting
everyday
. Suggestion
every day
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Also, this
this
plays a big role in Government revenue, Given that the majority of people are purchasing these attires on day to day life worldwide through shipping or by Air. For
instance in
Kenya, exportation of African print is high Accept comma addition
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therefore
these earns government income which is used for growth in public services such
as hospitals, roads and social amenities. As a consequence selling different cultures fabrics along
with clothing helps in country development as well as entrepreneurs.
In conclusion, I believe that it is worthwhile for people to dress in Accept comma addition
fabrics, along
atties
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is because, it helps in bringing communities and countries together, showing support and love, exporting fabrics and clothes are beneficial for entrepreneurs and government.Submitted by briannamalik06 on
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