*IELTS Training By Simiyu Paul_R The graph below gives information on the differences in clothing exports from three different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph illustrates exportation of clothing in Colombia,
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the
Japan
and Myanmar
between 1999 and 2003 in million
dollars.
Overall
, at the beginning of the period
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,period
Japan
had the highest rates. On contrary, Myanmar
witnessed significant fluctuations furthermore
at the end
of the period
it had the least number of exports.
In 1999, Japan
had the most sales in exporting clothes of
almost 600 Change preposition
apply
million
compared to other countries. After one year
it had a slight drop of around 50 million
, from 2000 to 2003 trend
witnessed a steady drop hitting a low of nearly 500 Correct article usage
the trend
million
at the end
of the period
. Colombia saw approximately 450 million
at the beginning of the period
after three years the rate of sales rose steadily by 250 million
. It experienced a slip on
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in
last
year
to 600 million
.
In 1999, Myanmar
had 0 exports of clothes. However
, in the following year
there was a sharp increase to 800 Add a comma
,year
million
having the most sales that year
in comparison to Japan
and colombia
. In 2001 it reached a peak of approximately 940 Change the capitalization
Colombia
million
, one year
later Myanmar
saw a dramatic fall of about 600 million
nevertheless
at the end
of period
it had an incline to around 420million accounting for Add an article
the period
least
exports compared to other regions.Correct article usage
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