People today often use the internet to learn about the culture of other countries. This means that it is not that important to travel to those countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The process illustrates the mechanism of orange
juice
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production in industry. Overall, it is clear that there are two sorts of
juice
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can produce. Where, one model is using
for natural
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the four natural juice process
four natural juice process
juice
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process, and another one is
artificial
Suggestion
the artificial juice production method
juice
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production method according to the flow chart.
First
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of all, the
organice
relating or belonging to the class of chemical compounds having a carbon basis
organic
oranges are collecting from farmers, and send them in the factory. The company
make
Suggestion
makes
has made
starile
an alloy of iron with small amounts of carbon; widely used in construction; mechanical properties can be varied over a wide range
steel
by applying
washing
Suggestion
washes
procedure.
Next
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, the extraction separates from the fruits,
then
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it goes fro
centrifugation
Suggestion
. The
pilates
(trademark) a set of exercises used in holistic medicine
Pilates
plants
pilates'
are used as animal feeds, and the
supernatant
Suggestion
uses as fresh
juice
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. Lately, some natural
juice
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send
Suggestion
sends
for packaging, and selling in the
supershops
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super shops
.
Consequently
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, a few fresh
juice
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again retreated by doing evaporation method to release water from
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juice
Suggestion
the juice
, and builds
concentreated
gathered together or made less diffuse
concentrated
juice
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.
Besides
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,
more significant process
Suggestion
the more significant process
are
also
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applied,
such
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as, canning,
warhouse
a storehouse for goods and merchandise
warehouse
warehouses
, and packaging.
Finally
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,
this
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types
Suggestion
type
of
juice
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also
Linking Words
share for selling in the supermarket.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural immersion
  • virtual tours
  • biases
  • authenticity
  • cuisine
  • perpetuate
  • sustainable tourism
  • misinterpretations
  • personal relationships
  • language acquisition
  • social media platforms
  • information accessibility
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