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The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of the world population, which changed in various regions between 1910 and 2010. Overall, it is clear that the highest ratio of people was changed in Asia for both charts.

Conversely

, the North region showed the least proportion of the population during the two periods. In the 1910 period, we can see that Asia had the maximum rate at 60% of residents.

, 25% of folks accounted for the European state, and it was the

second

-max populated country.

Besides

, 4% of the public

was

Suggestion

were

in Africa, while 5% had in North America.

However

Accept space

Latin America and other regions kept an equal rate, at 3% of people. In 2010, Asia was

also

the 1st- top country, which carried 54% of the people change. There was listed a quite equal percentage of individuals

for

Suggestion

North America, the Middle East, and North USA. The figure was around 5% respectively.

Finally

, the other regions showed the same proportion of the populace.

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