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some people think that parents should teach their children to be a good member of society whereas other believe that school should teach them. discuss both sides and give your opinion

#people #parents #children #member #society #school
many
Suggestion
Many
 people think that
chldren
a young person of either sex
children
 should be taught to be a good member of
society
 by parents.
however
Suggestion
However
,
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,
there is equally voiced another
perspertive
a way of regarding situations or topics etc.
perspective
 which claims that
school
 should teach children to be a good member of
society
. In
this
 essay
,
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 am going to discuss
both
 sides of
arguement
a fact or assertion offered as evidence that something is true
argument
further
 and put forward my opinion as well before drawing
connclusion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusions
.
children
Suggestion
Children
spends
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spend
 most of their time with family so, parents
plays
Suggestion
play
vital role
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a vital role
 in teaching them good
behaiour
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
.
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.
Before going to
school
 it is the responsibility of parents to teach them good behaviour
.
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.
however
Suggestion
However
,
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,
in some
cases
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cases, both
both
 parents might be busy with their job and sometimes it might be impossible for them to
spends
Suggestion
spend
 quality time with them.
on
Suggestion
On
 the flip side,
school
 is the
second
 home for
children children
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children, children
goes
Suggestion
go
 to
school
 to learn new things and good behaviour. Whenever children are at
school
,
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,
they learn quickly and easily compared to home as there many students are fro similar age.Together they learn better than alone.
in
Suggestion
In
 my opinion
,
Accept space
,
both
 parents and teachers play crucial in developing and teaching children to be a good person in
society
.
instead
Suggestion
Instead
 of
auguing
a contentious speech act; a dispute where there is strong disagreement
arguing
aging
 who is better and who should teach children good
mannars
social deportment
manners
,
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,
both
 sides should contribute to some extent to teach children.
to
Suggestion
To
 conclude
,
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,
 after analysing
both
 sides of the
arguement it
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argument, it
argument it
 is not hard to see that
both
 parents and schools should teach children to be a better person
.
Accept space
.
I think if
both
 sides contributed even a
little than
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little, then
little then
 the child will even more responsible and better members of
society
.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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