The government’s investment in arts, music and theater is a waste of money. Government should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

There is a claim that

invest

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invests

state

budget

on arts, music and

theaters

a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented

theatre

is

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are

a waste of

money

,

thus

state

budget

should use for public

service

. Even though I agree that public

service

is more

crucial but

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crucial, but

government should set

a side

on or to one side

aside

budget

for

development

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the development

of art and culture sector. Art and culture sector might not always help solving

major issue

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major issues

a major issue

for

societies especially

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societies, especially

in the level of national

economic

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economies

economy

economics

. So, the state

budget

should be used for upgrading public

service

such

as healthcare, education or infrastructure. An improved public

service

can improve overall quality of life of

locals

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the locals

and it is vitally important for their well-being.

For instance

, locals can live without going to

theater

a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented

theatre

for

recreation but

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recreation, but

absence of health care

service

will create

serious problem

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a serious problem

serious problems

for the citizens.

This

is a reason why the governments should consider public

service

investment as a priority sector.

On the other hand

, investing in arts, music and

theaters

a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented

theatre

is not a waste of

money

, because they are part of culture and society which carries from generation to generation. Arts are not always known as paintings or

crafts but

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crafts, but

arts

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the arts

can represent in old building architectures and poems. Sometimes those ancient arts and cultures can

also

generate

money

for local or for society.

For example

, a public museum can display valuable sculptures or can show historical documentary films for young generation to learn about history, at the same time it can generate

money

from cultural tourism.

This

type of tourism attracts tourists who travel to learn about different cultures and histories. In conclusion, government should consider public

service

as a main investment priory and spends

major portion

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a major portion

the major portion

of the funds to upgrade public

service

and follow by arts, music and

theaters

a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented

theatre

theatres

. Because both of them play important roles in different aspects.