The government’s investment in arts, music and theater is a waste of money. Government should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
There is a claim that
invest
state Suggestion
invests
budget
on arts, music and theaters
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatre
is
a waste of Suggestion
are
money
, thus
state budget
should use for public service
. Even though I agree that public service
is more crucial but
government should set Accept comma addition
crucial, but
a side
on or to one side
aside
budget
for development
of art and culture sector.
Art and culture sector might not always help solving Suggestion
the development
major issue
for Suggestion
major issues
a major issue
societies especially
in the level of national Accept comma addition
societies, especially
economic
. So, the state Suggestion
economies
economy
economics
budget
should be used for upgrading public service
such
as healthcare, education or infrastructure. An improved public service
can improve overall quality of life of locals
and it is vitally important for their well-being. Suggestion
the locals
For instance
, locals can live without going to theater
for a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatre
recreation but
absence of health care Accept comma addition
recreation, but
service
will create serious problem
for the citizens. Suggestion
a serious problem
serious problems
This
is a reason why the governments should consider public service
investment as a priority sector.
On the other hand
, investing in arts, music and theaters
is not a waste of a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatre
money
, because they are part of culture and society which carries from generation to generation. Arts are not always known as paintings or crafts but
Accept comma addition
crafts, but
arts
can represent in old building architectures and poems. Sometimes those ancient arts and cultures can Suggestion
the arts
also
generate money
for local or for society. For example
, a public museum can display valuable sculptures or can show historical documentary films for young generation to learn about history, at the same time it can generate money
from cultural tourism. This
type of tourism attracts tourists who travel to learn about different cultures and histories.
In conclusion, government should consider public service
as a main investment priory and spends major portion
of the funds to upgrade public Suggestion
a major portion
the major portion
service
and follow by arts, music and theaters
. Because both of them play important roles in different aspects.a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatre
theatres
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