The line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the regional household recycling rates in the
UK
, France
and Germany
from 2005 to 2015.
Overall
, the recycling rates in the UK
and Germany
showed a steady but significant rise over the period
, while
the percentage of recycled waste in France
experienced a downward trend.
In 2005 the recycling rates in the UK
and Germany
were nearly 35% and 20% respectively. Germany
's rate
increased sharply throughout the period
, exceeding the
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France
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France's
rate
in 2009 and reaching almost 60% at the end
of the period
. In the meantime, the percentage of recycled waste in the UK
grew to 40% in 2007,
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then
remained steady until 2009. During 2009-2011 it experienced a rapid surge to more than 50% and continued with a gradual increase to 60% in 2015.
In early 2005 the recycling rate
of the
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France
(50%) was the highest among these three countries. However
, it dramatically declined to 30% in 2013. Then
, there was a growth of 10% in 2015, but France
's recycling rate
was the lowest at the end
of the period
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