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Young people today are better qualified than they were in the past. Some people argue that this is because competition for jobs is greater than it used to be. Others say that people only continue their education because the opportunities exist for them to do so. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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The overall quality of well educated professionals has been significantly increased in the past few decades. Most of young graduates choose to take on extra courses
in addition
 to general ones. It is believed by many that
this
 fact is caused by increased competition for employment, while others think that
education
today
 is more affordable which results in a higher level of qualification.
This
 essay will analyse both sides of
this
 effect. Due to the availability of a broad range of colleges, universities as well as postgraduate courses,
education
today
 is available for almost everyone. Recent statistical researches have shown that even with increased tuition costs,
education industry
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the education industry
 has been experiencing
consistent
Suggestion
consistently
grow
Suggestion
growing
 at 10% each year. Since students have access to various grants, loans and international programs, it is understandable why many people see
this
fact as
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fact, as
 one of the main contributors to improve their qualification level.
In addition
, modern employment standards
force
Suggestion
will force
 young professionals to take a bachelor’s degree or even master’s to have a better chance in
today
’s job market. As an example, of the two recent graduates the one who has better qualifications in the required area will be chosen.
However
, mature
professionals state
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professionals, state
 that just a few decades ago conditions were not as tough as
today
.
Thus
, that might be the reason why many students have to improve their skills in keeping with competitive circumstances. In conclusion, nowadays people are more qualified than they used to be.
This
 can be linked with an increased availability of
education
 or challenging job market requirements. Despite the fact that the
education
today
 is more affordable, I personally believe that competition for employment is the real reason for improving
qualification
Suggestion
quality
 and it is expected to increase in near future.
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