People are encouraged to get rid of things in order to get newest fashion and the latest Technology.Do the disadvantage of this trend outweigh its advantage.
It is often noted that to
aquire
recent fashion and come into the possession of something concrete or abstract
acquire
occur
morden
belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages
modern
technology
society Suggestion
technological
today simply
throw away what they already owns.In my opinion drawbacks of Accept comma addition
today, simply
this
use-and-throw
culture
easily ecalipse
the economic one celestial body obscures another
eclipse
benifits
and the reason for why I believe so is financial assistance in time of need
benefits
analyzed
examined carefully and methodically; broken down for consideration of constituent parts
analysed
further
.
To begin
with,
consumerism always provokes a Accept space
,
use-and-throw
culture
which is harmful for
Suggestion
to
environment
.Suggestion
the environment
In other words
,
either it will be smart technology's gadget or new trendy clothesAccept space
,
,
people often became a Accept space
,
victem
of an attractive advertisement and purchase the product even if individuals can still an unfortunate person who suffers from some adverse circumstance
victim
fulfill
their purpose with what they already possess.Not only they buy updated gadgets or cloths but put in effect
fulfil
also
ditch them.As a result
,
those Accept space
,
garbage
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garbage, then
then
used in landfill,
which contaminate ground water, or else dumped Accept space
,
in
sea.One clear example would be a Suggestion
at
country
Ghana,
which is known as toxicityAccept space
,
,
because all Accept space
,
country
's e-waste is being dumped here in order to sort out usefull
remain.As its land is contaminated by e-wastebeing of use or service
useful
,
underground water Accept space
,
of
it contains Suggestion
on
in
higher amount
of leadSuggestion
higher amounts
a higher amount
,
which bring dire results to health and Accept space
,
environment
.
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the environment
Moreover
,
Accept space
,
this
use-and-throw
culture
never gets satisfied with what they have and works more to acquire fashionable cloths and recent technology;consequantly
cannot maintain work life balance.In most cases workaholic nature is a prime reason behind relationship failure
Suggestion
the relationship failure
hence
, add additional stress in the society.Furthermore
,
folks who are not able to purchase Accept space
,
latest fashion
often commit crimeSuggestion
the latest fashion
,
especially youngster do Accept space
,
pitty
crime to buy inferior in rank or status
petty
luxirous
items.displaying luxury and furnishing gratification to the senses
luxurious
Therefore
,
disturbs the peace of Accept space
,
country
.
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the country
However
,
there are a few benefits that must be considered.Accept space
,
Firstly
,
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,
consumerism boost manufacturing process
which is essential for Suggestion
the consumerism boost manufacturing process
a consumerism boost manufacturing process
country
's economic progress.Secondly
,
Accept space
,
this
mass production not only increse
employment become bigger or greater in amount
increase
increases
increased
rate but
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rate, but
also
embraced the community with choices.For instance
,
previously folks have limited choices for fashionable Accept space
,
cloths
clothing in general
clothes
,
but now one can have Accept space
,
thousands options
to make a selection.
In conclusionSuggestion
a thousand options
thousand options
,
Accept space
,
although
use-and-throw
culture
owns certain plus points like economic growth,
employment potential and numerous choicesAccept space
,
,
it has an extremely negative impact on Accept space
,
environment
and society. Suggestion
the environment
Hence
, disadvantage easily oversadow
its advantage.Suggestion
easily overshadows
easily overshadow
easily overshadowed
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