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Some people believe that the public health will be worse in the future than now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#people #health #future
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The diagram shows the different steps of
plant
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 from initial stage to end of the life of the
plant
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. In which, the
plant
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 has grown from one step to another day-by-day.
To begin
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 with, the seed is sown in the field and with applied of the water. After, period of time the seeds are grown with their root hairs along with that the lateral root.
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, the stage is germination and
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 with swelling, and with that, the buds from foliage from seed or growth
plant
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. It takes some more time from initiating to flowering stage, the reason behind that, photosynthesis. Where the
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 has some sort of roots and woods. Remaining step is, when we saw the formation of fruits in the
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. And up
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 process is the fertilization and the pollination. In pollination, the stigma receives pollen. And after the
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 is the death of the
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, when the life of the
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 is over it turn to a decay and decomposition. And spread out the ammonia (NH3). And the ammonia use as a
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 growth for newly implant seed. Overall, the cycle is defied to know how the steps are going from one seed to the end of the
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 life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • 1. Standard of health
  • 2. Average
  • 3. Lower
  • 4. Future
  • 5. Aging population
  • 6. Chronic diseases
  • 7. Sedentary lifestyle
  • 8. Lack of exercise
  • 9. Poor dietary habits
  • 10. Environmental pollution
  • 11. Technological advancements
  • 12. Impact on health
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