Government Should spend money on railways rather than roads To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

Every
countries
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country's
countries'
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
always try
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always tries
to do welfare work for their people. Among the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
welfare work
communication
system
is
one
of them. These days, public debate
has been going
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is going
on over whether the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
should spend money on
railway
ratehr
on the contrary
rather
than roads. In
perspective
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the perspective
of Bangladesh, I completely agree with
this
statement that
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
should spend more on railways
ratehr
on the contrary
rather
than roads.
Railway
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The railway
is
essential
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essentially
an
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a
communication
system
for any countries. It is not only a
communication
system
but
also
comfortable
one
. It should be develop is
such
way so that people can easily avail
this
.
However
,
goverment
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the government
government
should allocate big budget for the
development
of
this
sector. There are several
reason
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reasons
why
goverments
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
should spend more money on railways?
Firstly
,
lot
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a lot
of people can travel through
one
train
,
For
example
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example, one
one
bus can carry 50 people and in comparison to that a
train
can carry more than 500 people.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
clearly seen that from a
train
a lot of people can travel to their destination.
Secondly
,
railways
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railway
transportation is quite comfortable than
raod
an open way (generally public) for travel or transportation
road
transport. Specially comfortable facilities for ladies and infants, for
exapample
an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
, a
train
has washrooms and baby changing rooms so ladies and baby's can use these when they require.
Further more
in addition
Furthermore
railway
trasportation
a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
transportation
is more economic
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
road transportation. As the
railway
transportation is run by
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
and
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
always range the avail amount minimum range so that general people can avail it and travel to their destination.
Finally
, There
is
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are
no
trafic
the aggregation of things (pedestrians or vehicles) coming and going in a particular locality during a specified period of time
traffic
jam complications in
raiway
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the railway communication system
railway communication system
communication
system
.
Raiways
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Railway
lines are
streight
successive (without a break)
straight
street
and it has been
control
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controlled
by
computerized
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a computerized system
computerized systems
system
so there is no complication in regards to
trafic
the aggregation of things (pedestrians or vehicles) coming and going in a particular locality during a specified period of time
traffic
jam while the bus /
cars
one of a set of small pieces of stiff paper marked in various ways and used for playing games or for telling fortunes
card
face these on
regular basis
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a regular basis
. I admit that expenses in
development
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the development
of
railway
system
tooks
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take
takes
talks
took
a
lot but
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lot, but
it has lots of merits,
On the other hand
develpment
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
of
raods
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the road system
road system
roads system
radius system
system
is quite lower
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
railways. Though the
development
on
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of
the
railway
system
allocate the majority of the budget
amount but
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amount, but
in
long run
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the long run
it recovers the all expenses
by
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of
its long lasting facility. In
conclution it
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conclusion, it
conclusion it
can be summaries that
railway
development
is must
specially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
for
highly dense country
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a highly dense country
highly dense countries
like Bangladesh. Both
railway
and
roads
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road
development
is necessary but
railway
must be priorities in terms of its facilities and long lasting factors.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • environmental footprint
  • efficiency
  • pollution
  • cost-effectiveness
  • economic development
  • accessibility
  • public transportation
  • congestion
  • air pollution
  • initial investment
  • maintenance
  • upgrades
  • rural
  • urban
  • last-mile connectivity
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