Government Should spend money on railways rather than roads To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
Every
countries
Suggestion
country's
countries'
Use synonyms
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
always try
to do welfare work for their people. Among the Suggestion
always tries
Use synonyms
goverment
welfare work the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
communication
Use synonyms
system
is Use synonyms
one
of them. These days, public debate Use synonyms
has been going
on over whether the Suggestion
is going
Use synonyms
goverment
should spend money on the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
railway
Use synonyms
ratehr
than roads. In on the contrary
rather
perspective
of Bangladesh, I completely agree with Suggestion
the perspective
this
statement that Linking Words
Use synonyms
goverment
should spend more on railways the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
ratehr
than roads.
on the contrary
rather
Use synonyms
Railway
is Suggestion
The railway
essential
Suggestion
essentially
an
Suggestion
a
communication
Use synonyms
system
for any countries. It is not only a Use synonyms
communication
Use synonyms
system
but Use synonyms
also
comfortable Linking Words
one
. It should be develop is Use synonyms
such
way so that people can easily avail Linking Words
this
. Linking Words
However
, Linking Words
Use synonyms
goverment
should allocate big budget for the Suggestion
the government
government
development
of Use synonyms
this
sector. There are several Linking Words
reason
why Suggestion
reasons
goverments
should spend more money on railways? the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
Firstly
, Linking Words
lot
of people can travel through Suggestion
a lot
one
Use synonyms
train
, Use synonyms
For
Linking Words
example
Accept comma addition
example, one
one
bus can carry 50 people and in comparison to that a Use synonyms
train
can carry more than 500 people. Use synonyms
so
clearly seen that from a to a very great extent or degree
So
train
a lot of people can travel to their destination. Use synonyms
Secondly
, Linking Words
railways
transportation is quite comfortable than Suggestion
railway
raod
transport. Specially comfortable facilities for ladies and infants, for an open way (generally public) for travel or transportation
road
exapample
, a an item of information that is typical of a class or group
example
train
has washrooms and baby changing rooms so ladies and baby's can use these when they require. Use synonyms
Linking Words
Further more
in addition
Furthermore
railway
Use synonyms
trasportation
is more economic a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
transportation
Linking Words
then
road transportation. As the conjunction used in comparatives
than
railway
transportation is run by Use synonyms
Use synonyms
goverment
and the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
Use synonyms
goverment
always range the avail amount minimum range so that general people can avail it and travel to their destination. the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
Finally
, There Linking Words
is
no Suggestion
are
trafic
jam complications in the aggregation of things (pedestrians or vehicles) coming and going in a particular locality during a specified period of time
traffic
raiway
Suggestion
the railway communication system
railway communication system
communication
Use synonyms
system
. Use synonyms
Raiways
lines are Suggestion
Railway
streight
and it has been successive (without a break)
straight
street
control
by Suggestion
controlled
computerized
Suggestion
a computerized system
computerized systems
system
so there is no complication in regards to Use synonyms
trafic
jam while the bus /the aggregation of things (pedestrians or vehicles) coming and going in a particular locality during a specified period of time
traffic
cars
face these on one of a set of small pieces of stiff paper marked in various ways and used for playing games or for telling fortunes
card
regular basis
.
I admit that expenses in Suggestion
a regular basis
Use synonyms
development
of Suggestion
the development
railway
Use synonyms
system
Use synonyms
tooks
a Suggestion
take
takes
talks
took
lot but
it has lots of merits, Accept comma addition
lot, but
On the other hand
Linking Words
develpment
of act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
raods
Suggestion
the road system
road system
roads system
radius system
system
is quite lower Use synonyms
Linking Words
then
railways. Though the conjunction used in comparatives
than
development
Use synonyms
on
the Suggestion
of
railway
Use synonyms
system
allocate the majority of the budget Use synonyms
amount but
in Accept comma addition
amount, but
long run
it recovers the all expenses Suggestion
the long run
by
its long lasting facility.
In Suggestion
of
conclution it
can be summaries that Accept comma addition
conclusion, it
conclusion it
railway
Use synonyms
development
is must Use synonyms
specially
for to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
highly dense country
like Bangladesh. Both Suggestion
a highly dense country
highly dense countries
railway
and Use synonyms
roads
Suggestion
road
development
is necessary but Use synonyms
railway
must be priorities in terms of its facilities and long lasting factors.Use synonyms
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