Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The world has many countries in
this
most of
countries
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the countries
was developed in that era, but few rural areas
has not developed
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have not developed
yet. In that the developed nations were fully supported for the financial problem
to
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in
poor countries.
Also
, the
people
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person's
ideology to set about
this
support was not removed poverty in the countries that
time mankind
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time, mankind
think
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thinks
to
development
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developing
developed
nation
can give some other types of help to grow the poor nations. If
ask
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asked
to support, I totally agree with
this
statement and will elaborate
further
. In generally poorer countries has not much money but
also
, they have not more
business
to develop their nations and
provide to
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to provide employment
provide employment
employment
for their people;
However
, the rich nations were more powerful
business
and all the people has
employment
.
Moreover
,
development
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developing
developed
countries have to expand their
business
in the poorer
nation
thus
that
country
people were
employment
and
growth
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the growth
of the
country
GDP.
For instance
, United States of America has decided to our IT company expand their
business
in Africa.
Thus
, African people were more
employment
in their
nation
and develop to their
country
.
On the other hand
,
the poorer
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the poorest
poorest
nation
in
study
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the study
has no more. So, the urban counties put a more and reliable solution for those
country
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countries
.
Furthermore
,
development
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developed
developing
nation
has to change the
study
format or add more courses for student and develop their mind.
This
can very impactful for those countries rather than the financial aid.
For example
, in India
study
is more theoretical, while, the USA in
study
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the study
is totally based on the practical
that is
very easy
to
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for
students to learn. To conclude, all the rich countries to help ruler
nation
financial
aid but
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aid, but
also
, many other helps to they
can developed
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can develop
their economy as
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a deep hole or shaft dug or drilled to obtain water or oil or gas or brine
well
as those
country
people get more
employment
. In
this
my opinion, the
study
support was highly
impact
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impacted
to poorer countries to their
development
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • poverty alleviation
  • economic inequality
  • developing nations
  • foreign aid
  • sustainable growth
  • technical assistance
  • expertise
  • infrastructure
  • education
  • fair trade
  • trade barriers
  • sustainable development
  • environmental conservation
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