Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Reading stories in books
is
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are
a basic way for children to obtain knowledge and open their minds.
Although
watching
TV
and playing
computer
games are
also
popular educational methods
among
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Among
children, I believe that reading books is better and offers more advantages than
watching
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Watching
TV
and playing
computer
games. Learning by reading is more effective compared to
TV
and games because it is an active activity. Like any other skill, reading takes practice. To fully understand the content, children have to give
all
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All
their attention to the text.
Also
, more than just understanding a certain topic, children tend
to
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To
develop imagination, as they imagine the characters from the description they read, which
helps
Suggestion
Helps
them to learn more efficiently and deeply in the future.
Furthermore
, reading stories
also
helps children master language development, as by reading
stories
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Stories
, children learn pronunciation and vocabulary. It
also
increases a child's attention span,
and
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And
develops the ability to concentrate. It develops children's ability to express themselves
more
Suggestion
More
confidently, easily, and clearly in spoken and written terms. It develops and fosters a
child's natural
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A child's natural
Child's natural
curiosity On the other hand, the knowledge disseminated by vivid pictures on
screen
Suggestion
the screen
is easier for children
to
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To
imbibe, but too many moving objects and
colorful
having striking color
colourful
images can distract children, especially
some
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Some
young kids, from other important tasks. Playing
computer
games
also
can be very
addicting
Suggestion
Addicting
, as a result of which children fail to do their homework.
Additionally
, spending too
much
Suggestion
Much
time before a
computer
screen or watching
TV
can lead to health problems
such
as
shortsightedness
Suggestion
Shortsightedness
.
Therefore
, reading is better for both efficiency and health purpose. In conclusion, it can be reiterated that reading stories in
boo
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the book
books
k
i
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are
s better than
watchi
the act of observing; taking a patient look
watching
n

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