Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little can be done to rectify this. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, media

has become

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have become

more powerful since the development of communication technology. The influence of media on the society is undeniable. It is commonly argued that, people who operates the media has the power to

control

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views

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the views

and attitudes of others, and little can be done to remedy

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problem. In my opinion, I partially disagree with

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view. On the one hand, it is reasonable that media

governs the

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governs, the

people to some extent. Having

control

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over the media means preferred information can be shown while disliked information is censored and removed from broadcasting.

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, people who

control

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the media have the upper hand in adding their views and attitudes to the news while forecasting it. But most

this

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information is believed by uneducated people. In short, it is clear that media can

control

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illiterate people.

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, there are some people whose opinions are not affected by the media. Educated people can figure out the difference between the fake and real news. They have the capability to omit the distortions and think independently.

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, media controllers can

control

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what is being printed or telecasted, but they don'

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have

control

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people

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peoples'

peoples

person's

views.

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, if a crime is broadcasted on the television literates have the capability to know the truth of what is displayed.

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, educated

people

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peoples'

peoples

person's

person

views can'

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be controlled by

media

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the media

. There is a huge difference between these two groups of people. Education is the main criteria that separates these people. Uneducated people can'

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categorize the news whereas,

educated have

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educated, have

capability

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the capability

to do the same. The only way to reduce the power of media is providing education to the people. Government with the help NGOs should take initiative in educating the society. In conclusion, I am against the view, that the media controls the opinions of the people. There are some other people who thoughts can'

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be controlled by

media

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the media

. Education is the best solution for

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power house media

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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Relevant & specific examples

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328 words

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Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little can be done to rectify this. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The bar shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days

is live now is better than in the past? what do you think?

In many countries the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think this is happening? How can this issue be solved?

Unpaid work More and more young people from wealthy countries are spending a short time doing unpaid work such as teaching or building houses for communities in poorer countries. Why do young people choose to do so? Who will benefit more: young people or the communities?