Whoever controls the media also controls opinions and attitudes of the people and there is little can be done to rectify this. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, media

has become

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have become

more powerful since the development of communication technology. The influence of media on the society is undeniable. It is commonly argued that, people who operates the media has the power to

control

views

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the views

and attitudes of others, and little can be done to remedy

this

problem. In my opinion, I partially disagree with

this

view. On the one hand, it is reasonable that media

governs the

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governs, the

people to some extent. Having

control

over the media means preferred information can be shown while disliked information is censored and removed from broadcasting.

Moreover

, people who

control

the media have the upper hand in adding their views and attitudes to the news while forecasting it. But most

this

information is believed by uneducated people. In short, it is clear that media can

control

illiterate people.

On the other hand

, there are some people whose opinions are not affected by the media. Educated people can figure out the difference between the fake and real news. They have the capability to omit the distortions and think independently.

In addition

, media controllers can

control

what is being printed or telecasted, but they don'

have

control

people

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peoples'

peoples

person's

views.

For instance

, if a crime is broadcasted on the television literates have the capability to know the truth of what is displayed.

In other words

, educated

people

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peoples'

peoples

person's

person

views can'

be controlled by

media

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the media

. There is a huge difference between these two groups of people. Education is the main criteria that separates these people. Uneducated people can'

categorize the news whereas,

educated have

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educated, have

capability

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the capability

to do the same. The only way to reduce the power of media is providing education to the people. Government with the help NGOs should take initiative in educating the society. In conclusion, I am against the view, that the media controls the opinions of the people. There are some other people who thoughts can'

be controlled by

media

Suggestion

the media

. Education is the best solution for

this

power house media

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