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many people believe that mobile phone cause more harms than benefits. to what extend do you agree or disagree?

#people #phone
Onee
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One
 of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that cell phones are more
harmfull
causing or capable of causing harm
harmful
 than their advantages. There is a widespread worry that
this
 will only lead to a myriad of concerns in
one
's life.
However
, I do not entirely accept
this
 and I will explain why in
this
 essay. There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most preponderant
one
 is that by using the mobile phone we keep in contact
to
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with
 our beloved
one
 who live in abroad, it
also lead
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also leads
 to numerous other benefits in various fields.
Such
 as, we get the cap service at our
door step
the sill of a door; a horizontal piece of wood or stone that forms the bottom of a doorway and offers support when passing through a doorway
doorstep
 by using
application
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an application
 on mobile. Thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers, not only can
one
 benefit more when it comes to being effective, but can
also
 enhance the productivity and quality of their lives with much ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand
one
 in good stead, as far as augmenting their chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned. Another pivotal aspect of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help
one
 thrive and excel in varied areas.
Besides
, only when
one
 follows
such
 a system, can they broaden their horizons,
thus
, learning
such
 essential attributes as responsibility, dedication and perseverance.
Hence
, it is apparent why many are in favour of smart phones. To put in a
nuteshell
the shell around the kernel of a nut
nutshell
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 pen
down saying
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down, saying
 that it is indeed a debatable issue which needs a
further
 analysis and
disucssion
an extended communication (often interactive) dealing with some particular topic
discussion
.
However
, in the light of above discussed and
arguments it
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arguments, it
 would be quite logical to conclude that the advantages of mobile phone overweigh of its disadvantages in various aspects.

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