These days, it seems that an increasing number of people are leaving rural areas to live in the city. Discuss some of the effects of rural depopulation (migration from the country to the city ) and suggest some ways on which this trend could be reversed.

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Nowadays many
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Nowadays, many
people
livied
inhabit or live in; be an inhabitant of
lived
live
in
metrocity
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metro city
becouse
for the reason that; on account of
because
beaches
of more
emplyment
the state of being employed or having a job
employment
employments
unemployment
in major
city
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more
compareted
examine and note the similarities or differences of
compared
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rural areas, so we
rural areas so, we
a rural area so, we
area
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so, we discuss about the
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statment
a message that is stated or declared; a communication (oral or written) setting forth particulars or facts etc
statement
many folks are moved to village to major town
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first
preceding all others in time or space or degree
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the environment
environment
and air pollution
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are
major problem
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make or cause to be or to become
created
by human activity like the
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the people or companies engaged in a particular kind of commercial enterprise
industry
and chemical factory
estabish
set up or found
establish
in
rural
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rural areas
a rural area
area
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due to merely price to
brought
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bring
land and built. Example
,
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In
gujarat
a region of western India to the north of Bombay (bordering the Arabian Sea) where Gujarati is spoken
Gujarat
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dimolation
an event (or the result of an event) that completely destroys something
demolition
yard located
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with a forward motion
along
neares
(superlative of 'near' or 'close') within the shortest distance
nearest
city
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is Bhavanagr
destricts
a region marked off for administrative or other purposes
districts
district
distress
in
this
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land very harmful and
alos
in addition
also
allows
water are
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water, are
very
dameng
a particular environment or walk of life
domain
damming
damning
due to sea
beatch
an area of sand sloping down to the water of a sea or lake
beach
batch
beaches
are very polluted
ar
a mixture of gases (especially oxygen) required for breathing; the stuff that the wind consists of
air
or
area
there location
forther
to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)
further
,
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type activity in the rural
area
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due to living people
life
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is
redues
sit and travel on the back of animal, usually while controlling its motions
rides
reduce
radius
and not live
long
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a long life
long lives
life
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with
unhelthy condition
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an unhealthy condition
unhealthy condition
due to some
knowlageble
highly educated; having extensive information or understanding
knowledgeable
people migrate in
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city
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the city area
area
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for
batter
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life
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span with family
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problem
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the problem
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is a weather condition
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at
this
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time not
accurent
conforming exactly or almost exactly to fact or to a standard or performing with total accuracy
accurate
current
to predicted for which season
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fishing with a hook and line (and usually a pole)
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on-going
in don't know people and summer season
shckoching
hot and dry enough to burn or parch a surface
scorching
condition due to
farmer
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the farmer
farmers
are not creeping the seed for farming and due to collected feed sell in
market
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the market
a market
earnig
earn on some commercial or business transaction; earn as salary or wages
earning
money but
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money, but
in
this
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type weather
condtion
a state at a particular time
condition
conditions
people are very bed suffering
life
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in rural
area
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causes to
parest
continue to exist
persist
protest
priests
are moved to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
town and major
city
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for
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batter
something superior in quality or condition or effect
better
life
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with future own
childs
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children's
children
child
child's
lifes
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
life
.
example
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in many country recent
time
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times
not enough water present for
croping
the yield from plants in a single growing season
cropping
the goods
for
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to
feed and growing and selling
in
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at
matket
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the market
market
due to
earing
earn on some commercial or business transaction; earn as salary or wages
earn
earning
eating
some money it's very hard in rural
area
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.
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.
so
to a very great extent or degree
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in many rural
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area
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areas
are shifting to
mitrocity
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and big town for the
emplyoment
the state of being employed or having a job
employment
or job for living
life
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with wife
,
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,
father, mother and
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
its
to feeding something to
earing
earn on some commercial or business transaction; earn as salary or wages
earn
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and get good
eduction
the activities of educating or instructing; activities that impart knowledge or skill
education
reduction
in
urban
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urban areas
an urban area
the urban area
area
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for children
.
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.
in
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In
conclusion
,
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,
number
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a number
of people are
moved
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moving
to
major
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a major city
city
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for
batter
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life
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and
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batter
something superior in quality or condition or effect
better
education
provied
on condition, with the understanding, if; usually followed by that
provided
provide
provider
for kid's and some
unemplyment
the state of being unemployed or not having a job
unemployment
in
rural
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rural areas
area
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due to get jobs in
major
Suggestion
major cities
a major city
city
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and go to better
life
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span
compareted
examine and note the similarities or differences of
compared
to rural
area
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.
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