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Some people believe that it is more important to teach children the literature of their own country than other countries.Do you agree or disagree?

#people #children #literature #country #countries
Considering the above given statement, I partially agree with the statement.
Literature
xarries
move while supporting, either in a vehicle or in one's hands or on one's body
carries
 out with different genres and it can be studied in multiple languages. Teaching children of
thier
of them or themselves
their
there
 own
country
literature
dont
do not
don't
 make any sense. Giving importance to their own
country
literature
 make
childrern
a young person of either sex
children
 dumb and they find little scope for their higher education. To be more precise, developing or learning different
country
literature
 make children understand the importance of the particular field. It can be written
on
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about
 journalism, publications, poetry, drama and
manu
a quantifier that can be used with count nouns and is often preceded by 'as' or 'too' or 'so' or 'that'; amounting to a large but indefinite number
many
 more. So, developing the knowledge of different
lietratures
creative writing of recognized artistic value
literatures
dosen't
does not
doesn't
harm but
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harm, but
 eventually it makes children to aware of something which will help them in
further
.
For example
, I am from
India but
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India, but
 I know the different
contries
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country's
countries
counties
centres
 publications. I have done my schooling in my home
country
 carrying forward I done my Master's in USA. Where I am supposed to follow the
literature
 of that
country
 and I did so. By
this
 I have developed myself and it helped in my Job interviews and
also
 for my government
exams
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exam
 preparations.

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