Some people think that an international car-free day is an effective way to reduce air pollution.Others think that there are more effective ways to do this.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Todays era of globalization, people are more
facinate
having your attention fixated as though by a spell
fascinated
to use
morden
belonging to the modern era; since the Middle Ages
modern
modem
equipments which are Car, and electronic appliances.
It's
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Its
grand idea
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a grand idea
that government would
managed
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manage
a day for how to save an environment by vehicle free day
,
Accept space
,
stop to using
plastic
problems and save trees for climate
affects
property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business
effects
.
To begin
with, Car free day people are used to with their personal vehicle for daily travelling which has more reliable and convenient for them.
However there
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However, there
car running
by
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with
flammable
fuel which
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fuel, which
is made
by
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from
crude oil basically. That fuel burns and the smoke blow up into the fresh environment which will
creat
make or cause to be or to become
create
creates
air pollution and their vehicles makes honking while run through on the road and it's dangerous to produce noise pollution which directly affect on human brains. People keep
make
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making
them angry and makes wrong decisions on important things. Other aspects to save an environment In which the major problem created by
plastic
products. The
plastic
will found
evey
(used of count nouns) each and all of the members of a group considered singly and without exception
every
nook and corner of the hyper cities. When the
plastic
burns it's released toxic and it's very hazardous for human health government could notice
this
problem
.
Accept space
.
For prevention more and more trees need to plant up. Because trees inhale carbon dioxide and release oxygen for living

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainability
  • emissions standards
  • renewable energy
  • environmentally friendly
  • public transportation
  • pedestrian zones
  • commuter behavior
  • awareness
  • incentives
  • air pollution
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