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some people say that the only reason for a foreign languages is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign languages. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

#people #reason #languages #travel #work #country #someone
Languages Plays important role in human life. Some
believes
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believe
 that the most reason for learning a foreign
language
 is in sequence to
travel
 or
work
 in a foreign
countries while,
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country, while
country while,
 another group say that these are not
only reason
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the only reason
 to learn a foreign
language
. Nowadays, people are learning new languages for
theirs
of them or themselves
their
 interest and for career. Both have their own for and against. There are most citizens who learn foreign languages for benefits like they can easily
travel
 throughout the world and
also
freely to communicate with
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to communicate freely with
dealer
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the dealer
 for their
work
. Now, learning
foreign
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a foreign language
foreign languages
language
 has
important role
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an important role
 in international
trading
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trade
 market.
For example
, Indian traders are very
interest
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interested
interesting
 to business with foreigners so they have to learn foreign
language
 for trading because Indian had many
difficulty
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difficulties
 to understand or talk in
foreign
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a foreign language
foreign languages
language
On the contrary
, there are many other reasons for learning foreign
language
 not only for
travel
 or
work
. In
this
 modern era, people are like to learning
foreign
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a foreign language
foreign languages
language
 for their passion and
also
 learning
this
language
 for teaching poor student. Government
arrange
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arranges
 event in urban areas about learning foreign
language
. On the other side, there are wastage of time for some people because
they
of them or themselves
their
 learning foreign
language
 but not use their
skill
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skills
. School make compulsory to learn few common foreign
language
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languages
 which
are speak
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are spoken
are speaking
 in all over the world. To conclude and give my opinion, I would say that people should learn foreign languages because it can be helpful in any situation like
travel
,
work
, help any person and more

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