Some families have opted to teach their children at home. Why do you think this is? In your opinion, do you think that all children should be taught in a school environment? Say why you think home-schooling would not be a good idea and also point out some benefits for this chosen form of education.

Education
being
Suggestion
is
a very essential part of every
child
’s life and is usually seen imparted in a school where other kids study too. But many parents now are choosing to teach children
at
Suggestion
in
their homes
instead which
Accept comma addition
instead, which
is termed as
home
schooling. It’s a recent medium of education and a growing number of parents are opting for it. There are various reasons to why parents choose to
home
school their kid. Some children suffer congenital diseases which make them unable to be in public places and
thus
are left with no other
option
.
Next
, it is very common for celebrities to
home
school their children to keep them away from the media and public’s eyes.
Also
many a times parents choose
home
schooling as an
option
as their kid finds it diff0icult to catch up with other students and is a slow learner. In my opinion,
home
schooling does not really serve as a good medium for education. It limits a
child
too much and does not allow expanding his/her vision. It
also
reduces human interaction which is very essential for a
children
Suggestion
child
in their formative years. The
child
misses out on many essential habits and personality traits like responsibility, empathy and friendliness. The disadvantages heavily weigh out on the advantages in
this
case. All said,
home
schooling can sometimes be the only
option
left to opt for. Cases wherein the
child
is unable to leave his
home
,
for example
a kid suffering from a paralysis or an allergy to places which are crowded and have people, the
option
seems great. It is
also
an alternative medium for student who want to study very limited subjects and are keen on excelling only those. Conclusively, I believe that
home
schooling is an
option
to be chosen only in the unavoidable situations. It is always very important and beneficial or a
child
to develop in all ways and be able think with different perspectives.
Home
schooling does not guarantee an overall development which is the necessity of today’s times.

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