The chart gives information about the ageing population worldwide in 2000 and make predictions for 2050.
The bar chart
ilustrates
the rates of 60 - year - old citizens in the whole seven Continents during a 50 - year period from 2000 to 2050. Correct your spelling
illustrates
Overall
, the most significant percentage will be in Europe on average 35 %, the number has decreased to approximately 21 percent
by 2010. By Change the spelling
per cent
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contrast
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number
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in the Black - Continent. It was 5 % in 2020, but that will have Change the verb form
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50 years to be trippled
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A closer look at the Correct your spelling
tripled
date
reveals that the Correct your spelling
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others
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other
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is Asia, Correct your spelling
sentients
continents
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Lala America, followed by Ocelona
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Barcelona
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in North Amenca
. Those match with the percentages around (18,10, 13, 17) Correct your spelling
America
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respectively. The whole numbers have already Change the spelling
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in 2050. Correct your spelling
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To conclude
, the total extents of being live over 60 years around the world will be considerably increased between 2000 and and
2050.Remove the redundancy
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