The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph represents
underground
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the underground
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station
used by
passengers
throughout the day in London. The underground
station
is open for
passengers
from 6 am in
the
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apply
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morning till 10
pm
in
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at
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the
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apply
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night. The
number
of
passengers
using the underground is the highest at 7.30 am and 6
pm
due to
peak hours.
Similarly
, the
number
of
people
using the underground is lowest at 6 am in the morning and 4pm in the evening. The
number
of
people
using
underground
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the underground
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declines
further
at 9.30 am and
then
gradually increases after 11.30 am but remains stagnant till afternoon 3
pm
as not many
people
might travel in the afternoon. The
number
of
passengers
using the underground gradually increases again after 4
pm
and is highest at 6
pm
as many
people
return back from
office
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the office
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and usually prefer
underground
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the underground
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station
to commute. To summarise,
people
in London prefer using the underground
station
to commute to
office
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the office
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during peak hours and might prefer other modes of transport
other
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at other
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time

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words station, passengers, pm, number, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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