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The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The graph represents
underground
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the underground
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station
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 used by
passengers
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 throughout the day in London. The underground
station
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 is open for
passengers
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 from 6 am in
the
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apply
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morning till 10
pm
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in
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at
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the
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night. The
number
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 of
passengers
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 using the underground is the highest at 7.30 am and 6
pm
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due to
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 peak hours.
Similarly
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, the
number
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 of
people
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 using the underground is lowest at 6 am in the morning and 4pm in the evening. The
number
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 of
people
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 using
underground
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the underground
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 declines
further
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 at 9.30 am and
then
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 gradually increases after 11.30 am but remains stagnant till afternoon 3
pm
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 as not many
people
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 might travel in the afternoon. The
number
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 of
passengers
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 using the underground gradually increases again after 4
pm
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 and is highest at 6
pm
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 as many
people
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 return back from
office
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the office
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 and usually prefer
underground
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the underground
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station
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 to commute. To summarise,
people
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 in London prefer using the underground
station
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 to commute to
office
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the office
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 during peak hours and might prefer other modes of transport
other
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at other
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 time

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Vocabulary: Replace the words station, passengers, pm, number, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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