Nowadays, families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this. Why is this happening? Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the drawbacks?

"Family is not an important thing, it’s everything.” Based on Michael J. Fox word, family really plays a big part in each indiv
iduals life
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individual's
individual
. Family members cheer
ish and
be fond of; be attached to
cherish
provide us with
love
where the
love
from
thes
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of
e people are really incomparable. They helped us when we are in state
of d
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a state
epression, setback and failure
thus
because of
this
possi
tive feed
characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.
positive
back from our loved ones, it really helped us on confronting our problems. But, families nowadays are not frequently bonded and a lot of people have become used to
this
. To be honest, people nowadays are too into their works, choose gadgets than their own family and
lack
of communication. Event
hough they
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Even though
have more
time
towards thems
elves but to j
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themselves, but
ust unapp
reciate the
recognize with gratitude; be grateful for
appreciate
love
of famil
y member is
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a family member
such
a waste.
First
of all, peopl
e which most
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people, which
ly parents, are tend
to t
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tending
tended
oo obses
sed towa
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obsess
rd their job and forget about their children. Most of the
time
thay spent they hour
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time they spent
time they spent they
time that spent they
time though spent they
s in the office rather than at home and usually when they at home, they take that
time
to rest. Children naturally crave attention and they needed the maximum amount of
love
from their parents in order to feel happy. Recognition from their parents is what most of children nowadays are
lack
of. An easy example is when a child drew something and he or she wants the compliment of the paren
t but the
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parent, but
child notice that his or her parent was busy doing paperwork.
Thus
,
this
child disco
urage his
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discourages
or herself to ask for the comments.To conclude, job became the wall that limit
the
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limits
parent
time
with their children. Other than that, gadgets attract attention a lot of people and distract them from bonding with their family. They would rather watch a
story
in th
e
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on
internet rather than hear a real
story
from their own sibling. Even if the
story
that their sibling told was boring but
this
thing is more memorable than the
story
from the internet.
This
lovely memory cannot be bought by mo
ne
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with
y as its only obtained when we bonded with famil
y member. To
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family members
the family member
a family member
give an example, you will retol
d
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retell
this
moment with every family membe
rs in t
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member
he
next
several years when every siblings in your family have grown up.
This
story
will give you
such
a beautiful flashback and reali
se on h
have confidence or faith in
relies
ow fast
time
can be. To summarize, gadgets fooled people with their lifes
so t
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
life's
life
hat they spent most
of t
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Most
heir precious life on these repla
ceble elec
impossible to replace
irreplaceable
trical technologies.
Last
but not least, the
lack
of communication between family members caused a minimal understanding of family members personalities. Some people lost their interest to talk with their own famil
y but they
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family, but
usually talk among their friends.
This
is due to the fact that they have a mindset that famil
y woul
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the family
d not get what their
are
in or at that place
there
they're
saying and in family there are a small variety of topics that can be used to talk.
This
should not be the factors to stay quiet among family members because they will never know how you feel until you said it. Ego is one the bad chare
cteristics that
a prominent attribute or aspect of something
characteristics
needed to erase in our life in order to get along with our family peace
fully.As c
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peace
oncl
usion, the
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a conclusion
less
time
spent on talking with your family members is one the reason people nowadays distance their
selves with
reflexive form of "them"
themselves
family. To sum up, obsession towards work and gadgets cause people to ignore their family members and distance their
selves with
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their selves
each other. The
lack
of communication
also
make the situation even worse because that behaviour symbo
lize that
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symbolizes
you did not care about your family members. I just hoped that people realise
this
issue before it is too late.
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