Nowadays, families are not as close as in the past and a lot of people have become used to this. Why is this happening? Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the drawbacks?

"Family is not an important thing, it’s everything.” Based on Michael J. Fox word, family really plays a big part in each indiv

iduals life

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individual's

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ish and

be fond of; be attached to

cherish

provide us with

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where the

love

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from

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of

e people are really incomparable. They helped us when we are in state

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a state

epression, setback and failure

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characterized by or displaying affirmation or acceptance or certainty etc.

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back from our loved ones, it really helped us on confronting our problems. But, families nowadays are not frequently bonded and a lot of people have become used to

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. To be honest, people nowadays are too into their works, choose gadgets than their own family and

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of communication. Event

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have more

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towards thems

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themselves, but

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reciate the

recognize with gratitude; be grateful for

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of famil

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a family member

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a waste.

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of all, peopl

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people, which

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obsess

rd their job and forget about their children. Most of the

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thay spent they hour

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time they spent

time they spent they

time that spent they

time though spent they

s in the office rather than at home and usually when they at home, they take that

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to rest. Children naturally crave attention and they needed the maximum amount of

love

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from their parents in order to feel happy. Recognition from their parents is what most of children nowadays are

lack

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of. An easy example is when a child drew something and he or she wants the compliment of the paren

t but the

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parent, but

child notice that his or her parent was busy doing paperwork.

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,

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child disco

urage his

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discourages

or herself to ask for the comments.To conclude, job became the wall that limit

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limits

parent

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with their children. Other than that, gadgets attract attention a lot of people and distract them from bonding with their family. They would rather watch a

story

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in th

e

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on

internet rather than hear a real

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from their own sibling. Even if the

story

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that their sibling told was boring but

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thing is more memorable than the

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from the internet.

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lovely memory cannot be bought by mo

ne

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with

y as its only obtained when we bonded with famil

y member. To

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family members

the family member

a family member

give an example, you will retol

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retell

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moment with every family membe

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member

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several years when every siblings in your family have grown up.

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story

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will give you

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a beautiful flashback and reali

se on h

have confidence or faith in

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ow fast

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can be. To summarize, gadgets fooled people with their lifes

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hat they spent most

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heir precious life on these repla

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irreplaceable

trical technologies.

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but not least, the

lack

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of communication between family members caused a minimal understanding of family members personalities. Some people lost their interest to talk with their own famil

y but they

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family, but

usually talk among their friends.

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is due to the fact that they have a mindset that famil

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the family

d not get what their

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in or at that place

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they're

saying and in family there are a small variety of topics that can be used to talk.

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should not be the factors to stay quiet among family members because they will never know how you feel until you said it. Ego is one the bad chare

cteristics that

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needed to erase in our life in order to get along with our family peace

fully.As c

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peace

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a conclusion

less

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spent on talking with your family members is one the reason people nowadays distance their

selves with

reflexive form of "them"

themselves

family. To sum up, obsession towards work and gadgets cause people to ignore their family members and distance their

selves with

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their selves

each other. The

lack

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of communication

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make the situation even worse because that behaviour symbo

lize that

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symbolizes

you did not care about your family members. I just hoped that people realise

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issue before it is too late.