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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for research. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Animals should be given equal right as human beings
is
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are
 the opinion of
large number
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a large number
large numbers
 of people in the society. Whilst, others are on contrarian view and believe that they should be employed as human slaves. In my
opinion I
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opinion, I
 agree with the former view because they are the god creatures and must give equal rights to live. According to few, animals should be utilised to assist humans in various ways like a test
subjects
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subject
 in laboratories. Many of the scientist
believe
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believes
 that animal
such
 as monkeys are best for
preforming
the performance of a part or role in a drama
performing
 experiments as they have a close relation with humans. Testing various household products and cosmetics on monkey by numerous research lab are examples of
this
 approach.
However
, I don’t support
this
 view as animals are being tortured at
extreme level
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extreme levels
an extreme level
 while performing these test
trails
the act of testing something
trials
 and sometime it
also
 leads to death of these innocent creatures. A large group of people
believe
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believes
 that mankind does not have the rights to exploit animals. As the existence of every animal is important for ecosystem. To maintain the balance in the nature one should not utilise animals for their personal use, as every animal hierarchy is crucial for proper functioning of the food chain.
For instance
, there was a drastic decline in population of tiger
for
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in
 that in 1990, Corbett national park was developed by
Indian government
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the Indian government
 to stop the hunting of the tiger from huntsmen for tiger skin. To conclude,
although
 I don’t agree that dependency on animals is important for human growth and development. But, I believe more
weightage
 should be given for right functions of ecosystem and maintaining the balance of nature through giving same living right to animals.

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