You recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived it was unusable. Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it

Dear Mr and Mrs Williams, I am writing in regards to the complaint I have received from you recently. My sincere apology for the inconvenience and problem caused due to my actions and I assure you that I will be more careful in the future about it. I started learning the
piano
recently. As you may know, I work full-time and the only free time I am able to dedicate to my classes is weekends. I have hired a
piano
teacher to teach me during the weekends and I am sorry that the noise reached your flat. I am sorry about the inconvenience I caused
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you and Mrs Williamds. I did not expect the sound of my
piano
to be so loud and reach your rooms. I totally understand your position and request you to accept my sincere apologies. As a solution, I have decided that I will continue my
piano
classes at my tutor's house
instead
of mine.
This
way I would be able to continue my practice and not disrupt you. I hope
this
unpleasant situation hasn’t hurt our friendship. Yours sincerely, Alfred Harris
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • order number
  • shipment
  • delivery
  • damaged
  • defective
  • package
  • request
  • replacement
  • refund
  • customer support
  • awaiting your prompt response
  • solution
  • photos attached
  • upon inspection
  • apologies in advance
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