You are working for a company. You need some time off from work and want to ask our manager about this. Write a letter to ur manager. In ur letter . explain why you want to take time off from work. . give details of the amount of time you need. . suggest how your work could be covered while you are away.

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Dear Sir, I am writing requesting you two weeks leave in the

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2018, my sister is entering into conjugal relation and my parents anticipate making

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to add bliss and

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certain traditional rites my presence is demanded, which compels me to request

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leave starting the 15th April 2018 and will report on the 29th April 2018. I can anticipate your concern regarding my office work. I have perfectly organized the schedule and delegated jobs that would not cause hindrance to production any deviations will be

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the assistant manager.

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, I will be available via phone for any emergencies. I would be grateful if you could grant me

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leave that would allow us to make

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event a success and a memory of our

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invite you to grace and shower your warm blessings. Yours faithfully, Vishwa.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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